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Temptation - Haiku

Updated on October 6, 2012
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Fingers fondling fleeting time crazy

Strong Temptation touch the sun kiss death

Autumn embrace the sky heath.

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Bleeding dusk to feel wind

Cool hair cascades face against tear droplets

Horizon empty without silhouette collide.

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Knock on my grave rolling

Night waits to cover the sorrow ablaze

Temptation to hide autumn sky.

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      Loved the way you introduced the sun, autumn and night with a mixture of feelings in so little words, voted up,

      Jan

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      Rema T V 4 years ago from Chennai, India

      Hi Deergha,

      You are a very talented writer. Haiku is a wonderful concept and this haiku expresses a powerful message in so few words. Great! Well done!

      Socially shared. Cheers, Rema.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Very moving piece while incorporating Mother Earths magnificent moon, wind, sun, dark.

      Fantastic

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      Strong words expressed so creatively in this poem full of life and death.

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      Ryem 4 years ago from Maryland

      In such a small amount of words you've delivered a really deep message. This is really good poetry. I'm glad I found it.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Well done, thank you.

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      "Bleeding dusk to feel wind

      Cool hair cascades face against tear droplets

      Horizon empty without silhouette collide."

      Such beauty and depth.

      Voted up and away

      Have a good day. :)

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      ignugent17 4 years ago

      Very nice haiku. It is very enchanting ! I love the lines " Horizon empty without silhoutte collide."

      Voted up and more. :-)

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      Farhat 4 years ago from Delhi

      Good take on seasons..and a wonderful metaphorical way of describing them... it beautifully marks your own style!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Jan,

      Thank you for your kind visit, words, votes here. Its always a pleasure to have you. Your view means really a lot to me.

      God bless

      deergha

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      Dear Rema,

      You are very kind. Nice to have you as my friend. Your visit, shares all very much appreciated. It feels nice to know that you liked this one.

      God bless

      deergha

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      Dear shiningirisheyes ,

      I am honored to have you here. Your view is always much looked forward for. Thank you really.

      God bless

      deergha

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      Dear flashmakeit ,

      Your continuous support always is very much appreciated here. it feels great to know your view about this one.

      God bless

      deergha

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      Dear Ryem,

      You are most welcome here. Your view and visit is very valuable for me. Even I am also very glad to have you here, Thanks.

      God bless

      deergha

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      Mhatter,

      Its my pleasure always to have you here. Thank you.

      God bless

      deergha

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      Dear Sueswan,

      Thanks for your kind visit, votes and everything. Your view is soooooooooooo much appreciated here.

      You too have a great day ahead

      God bless

      deergha

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      Dear ignugent17,

      Many thanks for your kind words, visit, votes and all..........Its much appreciated here friend.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Dear Shara,

      Thanks for your kind words here. I am honored o have you here actually. Your continual support and inspiration is much more precious for me.

      God bless you dear

      deergha

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      A little touch of sadness these but I loved your autumn sky. We are always a little tempted by certain things. Passing this on.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks dear Gypsy for your kind visit, view and sharing. Its always a pleasure to have you here.

      god bless you

      deergha

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      wow kept me frozen in my seat as I read in others awesome!!!!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Frank ....You are very kind. Well..... ask me what actually frozen means. That was what my condition was a little while ago after I went through your latest poem. Thank you very much and your taking time off to comment here is much appreciated here.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      geez..that's A THUMBS UP 100x deergaha!! Amazing haikus!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Spy,

      thank you very much for dropping by and commenting here. Your visit and view is much appreciate always.

      god bless you

      deergha

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