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Passion and Tenderness

Updated on January 23, 2012


Passion, the air is charged when we meet

Tenderness, we will slow dance to a band

Passion,Our bodies feel the heat

Tenderness, I brush your cheek with my hand


Passion, the back of your neck I will bite

Tenderness, I will whisper in your ear

Passion, we can't stop though it's not right

Tenderness, we have lost all our fear


Passion, the room is dark when we touch

Tenderness, together till morning light

Passion,we need each other so much

Tenderness,how soft is the night


Passion,Together we melt

Tenderness,our souls are one

Passion,the love that was felt

Tenderness,we kiss when we are done



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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      Beautiful poem.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you,anupma

      much love

      your comments are appreciated

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      Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very good and yes, beautiful.

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      Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very good and yes, beautiful.

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      Ghaelach 5 years ago

      Morning Cleaner3.

      A wonderful poem and i enjoyed your style.

      UP/A/B

      LOL Ghaelach

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      very passionate...and tender. lol

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Hi Michael this was very beautiful. Love the passion/tenderness comparison. Keep up the great work!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Ghaelach, you great writer

      Thank you Jackie, you beautiful woman

      Nothing better than having feedback from my two fav inspirations.

      Thank you Caroline.

      Thank you Nicole.

      I just love this community

      of poets and writers.

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      Me too and you are quite welcome :)

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      LChristiane 5 years ago from Florida

      I love how it switches between passion and tenderness...it's like the difference between breathing in and breathing out. While reading this, I really felt myself breathing, in and out.

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