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That Girl... Over There

Updated on March 31, 2012

Hidden Gem

This is dedicated to the guys who can't see what a Diamond they have right in front of them. Be careful for you might lose her to someone who can.



See that Girl... over there

let me give you some advice

you don't deserve her

you don't how to treat her nice


I know you won't listen

but let me throw you a bone

I want her for me

I want her for my very own


See That Girl... over there

She has style and class

you can only see that

she is a beautiful lass


I will treat her so good

you know you don't love her,

like the way that.. I could.


See That girl... over there

a Queen, she should be

I would put her on a throne

high above...for all to see


See That girl... over there

she deserves the best

she so very special

she isn't like the rest


See that Girl... over there

now she is all mine

I looked for treasure

and what did I find


A hidden Gem.. Beauty

that you couldn't see

you have lost her now

for she now... Loves Me.

















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      sam209 5 years ago

      Oh yeah! Definitely love this one! One of my favorites that I've read from you Michael! And the words are so very true! Reminds me of a song called "A Women Needs Love(Just Like You Do)."

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Very nice Michael, yes often we don't realize how much we have until the moment it's gone.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ sam, my man. thanks for your support and the props.

      Great song, thanks for putting me in good company.

      @ Katrine, my lovely. thank you for your insightful comments, you don't know what you have till it is gone.

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      Princess Prisca 5 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

      cleaner3,

      BRAVO!!!! Fine work indeed. LOVE IT!!!!

      Beautifully written and it is 'soaked' with wisdom and truth!

      Let me add this saying: You will never miss the water, until the well runs dry...

      Voted up and across the board!

      Blessings Michael!

      Ciao...Princess Prisca

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Yes my Lovely Princess, your saying rings very true. That is a good way to put it. I saw your last hub and it was awesomme.

      Much Love

      Michael

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Way to go Michael, some never miss the water 'til the well runs dry...

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      It's so true that we don't notice or appreciate properly something or someone until they aren't there any more, but good luck to the one who hung around until she was free.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ ruby thanks for visiting and comments, what is it about the water and the well.?

      @ Blossom, thank you for your constant support. Yes, this came to me when i saw a guy talking down to his girl.

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      AND - you're a man who appreciates what he has - instead of wasting energy peering over that dumb fence! Michael - this reminds me of a western song called; Hold My Beer by Aaron Pritchett (not responsible for spelling..lol). Hold my beer...while i dance with your girlfriend-cause she needs a real man - not a dweeb like you! You don't see what you got - but i DO!'...somethin' like that..xx

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you, for visiting and comments. But I am a man, and don't tell nobody( but I like to look). LOL And you look beautiful.

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      bluebird 5 years ago

      Dear cleaner3,

      It warms my heart to know there are still a few men out there who really care, who treat a woman the way she was meant to be treated, with tenderness and care.

      Still, on the other hand, when a woman looks up to her man the way she was meant to...and lets him be her guide in all things, then he naturally longs to love her and protect her and care for her.

      A very touching poem, thanks!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ahh, My little Colorado bluebird, good to see you. Yes it is like a sweet bluebird lands on your arm and sings a sweet melody, you can't keep her if she wants to fly off, just enjoy her while you can.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Wonderful poem Michael. I have seen many guys mistreat their girlfriends and always felt sorry for the girls. Great job.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      there are too many girls out there that have low self esteem, and they just need to believe in themselves. they can be strong women like yourself

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      relujobs 5 years ago from Romania

      Very nice poetry, i really liked, it's inspiring, but at the same time guide you to appreciate a woman more than you do now

      Vote up and beautiful hub

      With respect,

      Relu the beginner :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      relu,

      I was like you

      a beginner too

      just start writing

      and you will be cool.

      thanks for the comments

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      see that man over there?

      that's Michael, a man so sweet and caring...

      great poem Michael...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Raci, thank you for visiting me. you can always be depended upon to write something nice to me. you are one of my most loyal followrs and i appreciate your support.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Oh My God! =) Michael, you are a cheeky, cheeky guy, aren't you =) Dangerously awesome!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Max, thanks for the compliment(I think?) I take it you liked my poem. What exactly does that mean, Cheeky?

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Michael, of course I LOVED it, I only meant it in a good way of course =) I meant cheeky in endearingly sweet charming way, you know, teasing =)

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      Michael ...See this girl , reading your poem now . LOl ..This is so beautiful side in you ,seeing the girl in her other side ,the inner side . All men must have this attribute ..but sad because most men sees the other side which is fading..love this line--See That girl... over there

      a Queen, she should be

      I would put her on a throne

      high above...for all to see

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Yes my little angel, all men have this side they just are scared to show it.

      See that Angel

      she is so sweet

      loving her

      would be a treat

      she surely is

      heaven sent

      to heavens door

      is where I went.

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      ahorseback 5 years ago

      Sometimes I believe that mankind is hardwired to be always looking over the fence , and who pays , the women and children ! Its always been a fault of mine , I know that !

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      ahorsback, yep, i believe that is the weakest link in man's genetics. the female, they own us.

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