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That Look In Her Eyes (limerick)

Updated on June 23, 2013

At noon, there's this look in her eyes.

The excitement she can't disguise.

We leave the drive thru.

Can I have a few?

As she stuffs her face with french fries.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      Ha ha ha... don't ever ask a girl for her french fries! lol If she offers, that's one thing :D

      This is cute, I'm liking your limericks!

      (Send me a dang email so I can send you the HP-tips one that I wrote for you!!! :D )

      Up and others, of course... sharing too!

      Cat

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      Man of Strength 3 years ago from Orlando, Fl

      Thank you, so much Cat! Yes, I've had to return to the drive thru to get my own and she'd still sneak and eat a few of mine! As far as the email should it be in Google+?

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Lol! Too funny! Upsize my French fries please and don't forget the mayo!

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      Man of Strength 3 years ago from Orlando, Fl

      Hi Cris,

      Thanks for stopping in. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I see you love french fries as well.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      MOS, I sent you an email through your 'Fan Mail' section on your profile page... you should have my email, if not, go to my profile page 'Fan Mail' and click 'Send Cantuhearmescream" an email... otay? :D

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      Man of Strength 3 years ago from Orlando, Fl

      Otay, I will get right on it.

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      idigwebsites 3 years ago from United States

      That's me! Heheheehe. I love my fries with the powdered cheese.

      Nice limerick you've written. Very very good. :D

    • Man of Strength profile image
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      Man of Strength 3 years ago from Orlando, Fl

      Hi,

      Thanks so much for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed it. So you're a shoe enthusiast I see.

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      PoeticPhilosophy 3 years ago from Canada

      Haha good poem, gave me a laugh :)

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      Man of Strength 3 years ago from Orlando, Fl

      Thanks for stopping by.

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