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That Wonderful Place

Updated on July 29, 2013

You were thinking.. of me
there I was
far across.. the sea

Thinking of you,
that beautiful face ..

That wonderful place ..

The entirety of space
that keeps us apart ...
just two loving hearts
wondering when..
we will be.. together again

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      lovedoctor926 3 years ago

      Your poems are so beautiful.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      Aww, Michael, this is beautiful and romantic. Sad; I forgot what it's like to yearn for someone... wait, I'm not sure I ever had. Can you yearn for someone to get the heck away from you? lol

      Beautiful!

      Up and others ~ Sharing too!

      Cat

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Marlene .. thank you ... for the comment and the visit ..

      I love when beautiful women show up without any notice ..such a pleasant surprise.

      Michael

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      The lovedoctor stole my words. ^

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My kitty Cat.. thank you for the comment ..

      It must be a great day for me... when two of hub pages beauties ...show up on my hubs on one day ..

      You can joke about love .. when you hide your heart .. but the reality is that we are all... as lonely as the next person.. some of us just hide it better than the others ..

      Love

      Michael

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Jackie .. my dreams have come true .. three beautiful women hubbers .. and all great poets and writers in their own right.. visiting me ..

      I am humbled .. all I need is my muse..

      thank you Jackie

      Michael

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      Aw, gee Michael... you read right through me! It's easier to put on a happy face sometimes, then it is to let it all out. I suppose letting it all out makes for some lovely poetry though, doesn't it?

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My Kitty Cat .. your last poem was so heartfelt and beautiful .. it left me stunned .. when you can express thoughts with such words.. that makes me wish I wrote them .. then you have touched my heart and soul..

      the universe is awash now.. with my energy flowing across space and time .. hoping it has brushed your cheek or is it just knowing you have visited me twice .. Nirvana

      Michael

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      That's so sweet Michael, but you write like that, always! Truth be told, I could put up a 'sad' hub every day... but I don't want to scare everyone away... lol.

      Oh, I could visit you a hundred times a day... and your energy and love does reach across space and time. You have such a beautiful spirit!

      Hugs,

      Cat

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      So cute and beautiful.All of us have that yearn and cant live without it sigh

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My Kitty Cat...

      your poem was not "sad" by any means .. beauty is in the eye of the beholder.. someone once said, so my beauty .. it would take you along time to scare away all your fans..

      quit looking for love .. your love will find you .. timing is everything in life .. every flower has it's garden.. every song has it's tune .. every poet has his muse.. have patience my sweet .. your knight in shinig armor is out there .. you and him just have not met yet .

      Michael

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      James .. thank you my friend.. it is appreciated

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A great expression of yearning and longing in beautiful poetry.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you blossom.. your visits are greatly looked forward to..

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      So beautiful indeed and the visual of that despondent one peering across the sea just yearning for the one who completes his heart to the full, does make those pangs ever so sharper in one's heart like a dagger ... the longer he must wait.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      God bless,

      Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you ..Faith... you are to kind to me..

      love your comment .. very poetic..

      love and hugs Faith..

      Michael

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      The entirety of space

      that keeps us apart ...

      just two loving hearts

      wondering when..

      we will be.. together again

      Love these beautiful words Michael and thank you for sharing.

      Eddy.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Eddi..

      yes that is one of my favorite couplets.

      michael

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      Dianna Mendez 3 years ago

      I think when lovers are apart the time seems like eternity. Well said in your poem.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you teaches .. time goes so slow when you want the one you love to be by your side.

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