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Poem : That Place!

Updated on December 21, 2011

That place!

Wary I was!

Almost frozen

by a cool

hypnotic daze

of tiredness

which I

quickly felt .

Then suddenly

in one instant

That's all

she wrote

I was out!

Fell asleep.

All I could


Was an instant.

That moment

when I smiled


No resistance

To the way

that I felt.

Helpless !

Over flowing

with bliss!

I am guilty

I invited this

restful state.

An outcome

Far greater

than any


I could ever


Strange how

I knew this.

There it was

As again

I know that


I was in


familiar territory

I can call it

nothing other

than being

In That Place!

There was this


As it blanketed


The air was

soothing and


There was a

peaceful quietness

That followed


I could feel

the moment

As it breathes.

Yet it was

littered with life

in That Place!

There were

people moving


as they were

all smiling

A heavenly

choir sang

from these

white chapels

They had roofs

that were made

out of clouds

I felt somewhat

of a beautiful

New type

of feeling

Imagine this

sound being

Silent but loud!

In That Place

These were

animals playing

In giant


Where fish

swim on branches

that were close

to rivers that

wept with joy.

Birds flew

in sync while

hugging trees

as if they

were dancing

with branches

making parthners

with leaves.

As the wind

Spoke softly

And made music

With the breeze.

In That Place!

Where sunlight

Shared it's


with he days

In equivalent


As the moon



shared it's glow

With the nights.

The sounds of


Were no longer


It’s was rather

The symbol

which announced


Was alright.

In That Place!

I felt myself

going deeper

The sleep

Was now

fading fast

The views

once gave life

was now

Becoming dim

No longer

Could I tell

How long this


Was going to last


Louder heartbeats

the clouds were

moving away

so fast

It started to


I was quickly

Losing focus

Forgetting how I

Ever got to be

In That Place!

Bless .

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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      That's a great suggestion dear "AE" if I have these dreams to look forward to I might as well .lol I love doing the sincere and truthful imagination dream, and sometimes I catch myself in some beautiful day dreams.

      Thanks as always , and keep up the great work .


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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Sky!! You were in a peaceful place. Heaven will be like that, peaceful and tranquil. Warm Wishes...Take another

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      Mrs L A Gibb 6 years ago

      You always hit the nail on the head Sky, with your beautiful writing on how true it all is. I too have that place, IN THAT PLACE.

      You are right V Qisya God does love us all and is there when you need him.

      If I were a man Frank Atanacio I would be locked up in that four by four room with my hero and just play sweet music.

      every one take care.

      If you like see my new hub.

      if you dont see it. will be there by the end of today thursday.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      It's never too much , when you are being led by those beautiful spirits that possess writers . You know they are a special breed !

      Thanks for reading and enjoying as explained in your joyful words this day.

      In small spaces with the likes of too much???

      Give thanks.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks very much V. for that beautiful comment . I also thing that we pay homage to the night and day , leaving some to ask us .Do you sleep?

      Just as it looked , I committed to this seemingly self hypnosis , and dreamed in the quiet of the moment. Yes it wanted to have chapels with roofs made of clouds. Endless beauty.Peaceful, where in no danger the fish swim on the branches of trees overlying bodies of water.

      It's nice to do the trance ,providing it remains undisturbed.

      Yes we do and more than you know . Sincere thanks dear lady and do have yourself a wonderful day.

      Bless and keep writing, I think you told me this also.

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      Oh yeah I can remember that place.. It was me Beyonce and Shakira all trapped in a four by four room.. they wanted to play strip poker.. I was all set to go.. oh wait too much information.. Love this Hub Skye :)

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      V Qisya 6 years ago

      "They had roofs

      that were made

      out of clouds".

      Wow, I could imagine that. How lovely it was. God loves us all. No matter what, he's always there when you needed him.

      Beautiful! up and away :D Take care, Sky.

      Best Wishes, V