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The 22-Year-Old Male Who Writes Lyrical Poetry: 'Blacklisted'

Updated on November 16, 2017


It’s all a pretend,
But it brings me down,
More than you will ever know.
I’ll be forever hard to get,
Even harder to track.
So now you can get down…..
Get down on my blacklist!

Get away,
Get away,
Get away from me!

Such a shame,
That I’m gone from you this way;
Off in the distance,
Like this……

If you have to,
You can talk at the tone.
(If you want to).
Because no,
I won’t phone!
Won’t ever think to call you back,
So you may as well……

Get away,
Get away,
Get away from me!

Get down on my blacklist!

I get high,
From putting you down in vain this way,
Putting you down on my blacklist!
Like this…..

Might have bled out on the cards you played,
But won’t be around to,
For round two.
“I’ll always win in my own way”,
And 4 Aces high, means you can get down on my,
Get down on my blacklist!

Your face soon forgotten.
Feelings get pushed back.
Your words merely lost track.
So your lights, they get turned black.

Blacker than the blackest black,
It turns black.
And it’s too late for us to turn back.
So get away,
Get away,
Get away from me!

But stay!.....
Stay down on my blacklist!
On my list of only the darkest,
You turned black…..

Written between 11/08/2015 (1:00pm) & 13/08/2015 (3:25am)


5 out of 5 stars from 2 ratings of Poetry


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      Missy Smith 2 years ago from Florida

      Lol...I'm sure I will continue to like your thing Darius. If you would like to check out my thing sometime, feel free to do so. :)

      Take care, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. :)

    • Darius Kamiab profile image

      Darius 2 years ago

      Thank you for liking my thing :) haha

    • Missy Smith profile image

      Missy Smith 2 years ago from Florida

      Good! Keep doing your thing Darius, your thing is awesome! ;)

    • Darius Kamiab profile image

      Darius 2 years ago

      Thank you Missy! comments like yours keep me doing my thing, much appreciated :)

    • Missy Smith profile image

      Missy Smith 2 years ago from Florida

      Definitely very interesting poem, a little harsh, but in an understandable way. I could feel anger and hurt in your words, but also determination and triumph in the words. Lots of different energy in this one. It is very good! :)

      Voting ^^^


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