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The 22-Year-Old Male Who Writes Lyrical Poetry: 'Disguised'

Updated on December 8, 2016

Disguised

Quick! Move from sheet to sheet.
Escaped, another Virgin Mary Saint.
Let me move from shit to sheek,
So you can’t force it in my sleep,
To move in with my heart-beat,
And fill it up to leave empty.

Half full,
Half empty,
Ever-changing.
Let’s say,
Nothing,
So I can think,
Your feeling.

Cinderella ain’t getting no Prince-Charming,
Since chandeliers are still burning,
With no candle-stands.
Glass slippers were out of stock next Tuesday.
And then the carriage was stuck in traffic,
With a speeding ticket.

Wolves dressed as foxes are on repeat;
No tail,
Yet fangs,
But still squeal.

Though even in a Phoenix state of vogue,
A black tint on her wings would begin to show.
And her claws were talons,
Like I’d never even seen before.....

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Written on 07/07/2015

Disguised
Disguised
5 stars for Poetry

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    • Darius Kamiab profile imageAUTHOR

      Darius 

      3 years ago

      Thank you for your comments :) I don't really hear such detailed comments on my work, so it really is much appreciated! I totally agree! The "very in your face" remark was what threw me that was all, but I understand what you're saying :) You too young lady ;)

    • Missy Smith profile image

      Missy Smith 

      3 years ago from Florida

      Darius, I didn't say the in your face was a bad thing. Quite the opposite, it is awesome! Don't change. Channeling your emotions is definitely what a true poet does; In my opinion anyway. It's about being brave enough to show emotions in their authentic form; just the way you feel them you express them. Keep up the good work young friend! :)

    • Darius Kamiab profile imageAUTHOR

      Darius 

      3 years ago

      Thank you so much Missy! :) I always appreciate your feedback, because I see you as such a talented writer! a back-handed compliment is also a bonus as well, gives me room for improvement :) Writing helps channel my emotions that i'm feeling at the time, so that might be why it's always so in your face haha, i'll work on that :)

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      Missy Smith 

      3 years ago from Florida

      Your poetry is Cool! I mean how else is there to describe it...When I read it, I'm thinking, this is the most courageous poetry, with a forceful approach. Very in your face! I like that about your poems. :)

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