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The Back of Her Wings Fall

Updated on December 11, 2011


Colors swept away by storms

Destroying its beautiful forms

Just like a feeling of two spirit

The back of her wings fall

Falling further down into a well

Never knew when will they ever meet again

The sound of splash from her eyes to his hand

Building a river of misery

With sorrow and grief

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Gypsy, thank you!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Sad but beautifully said.

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Ruby, thank you! :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is so sad chanroth. Beautifully written. Building a river with misery, Profound!!

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi writerscentro, ahourseback and Derdriu, thank you all very much for commenting and reading. @writerscentro, this is a touchy poem. My friend read this and she said..."sensitive read!" Thank you! :)

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      Derdriu 5 years ago

      Chanroth: What deep truths, graphic images and searing emotions can be found in the building and breaking of relationships!

      Thank you for sharing, etc.,

      Derdriu

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      ahorseback 5 years ago

      Awesome , mysterious , real.....love it :-}

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      Aditya Soni 5 years ago from India

      Destroying its beautiful forms.... wow!! Touchy Poem