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The Ballerina and The Sad Violin Part 3

Updated on June 16, 2011

Kalina, closed her eyes and flinched as she smelled the whiskey in his breath. “You smell nice and pretty like a wild flower that grows in the wild fields?” Kalina disgusted, as he ran his fingers across her collar bone.

“If you do what I say, maybe I will let you go, but you have to be a good girl for Mr. Conrad” moving his hand up towards her face, grabbing both sides of her checks and squeezing them together forcing her to pucker her lips. Her dread dissolved into tears, no one around to help her. She felt hopeless, exactly what she feared.

“Don’t be scared, ssssshhh” releasing the grip on her cheeks and placing his finger over her lips, her body clinching and her tears flowed in with speed.

“Please, please, stop, don’t do this” he pulled her away from the wall and slammed her to the ground behind the reception desk. He pinned her down by both wrists as he worked his heavy frame over her. He slithered himself up to her face and turned her head sideways until her ear was aligned with his lips and whispered “I’m going to give you a night you will never forget.” Kalina, let out deep sobs

“Nooooo, please don’t do this” she cried as he violated her essence with his filth. The smell of the whisky penetrated her clothes along with his stench of his body odor. He lifted himself off of her and reached for his discolored old trousers and held them with his hand as he wiped his forehead. She shivered at the sight of his face. His face and smell now a part of her mental recollection.

Kalina, Lifted herself off the ground frantically and ran for the entrance of the studio, not looking back. She made it through the boards that barricaded the entrance and ran as fast as she could. Not once did she turn to look back to see if he was following her. Tears of grief continued to fill her eyes afraid of them never stopping. How was she going to explain to Alinna what had just happened? Kalina hoping she wouldn’t have to tell anyone, keeping this a hidden secret.

As she turned the corner of Madison Ave., she noticed the front porch light was off, happy to know that Alinna was not home. She made it to the front door, something she felt that could have come sooner. She turned to look at the narrow street of the 2300 block of Capitella St. marking this night her worst nightmare.

Alinna, half asleep walked to the kitchen to see what was for breakfast. The kitchen light was not on, it took her by surprise. Kalina was always the first one in the kitchen on a Saturday morning. “Hmmm, wonder where she is at, she couldn’t still be asleep?” Alinna walked back up the stairs as she dragged her slippered feet along the hard wood floor, and let herself into Kalina’s bedroom. “Kalina, you’re still asleep?” when she looked Kalina was not asleep, her bed was nicely done. “I wonder where she could have gone.”

Alinna heard the front wooden door open and shut as the footsteps trailed over to the staircase. Alinna stood at the top of the stairs and said “Why hello there sunshine, where have you been?”

“Out” said Kalina with a stern look on her face.

“Out… you, on a Saturday morning?”

“Yes…Alinna out! Why is it a problem? I don’t make it a problem when you’re out almost every second of the day.”

“What has your panties all in a bunch? It was just a question, sheesh.”

“Well until you start paying some bills in this house, then you can ask questions, but until then mind your own damn business!” Kalina shouted angrily. She turned her back to Alinna and walked into her bedroom.

Whoa, where did that come from.” shocked by the way Kalina replied. She had never heard Kalina talk that way to anyone including her.

Where was all this anger and animosity steaming from? Alinna quite puzzled by the behavior change Kalina was having. She was always the one to speak in a civil manner with more of a balanced personality.

Alinna knocked on Kalina’s door and asked “Kalina, may I come in?”

“No I want to be left alone, can you just respect that and go away?”

Alinna worried in turn said “Ok, well if you want to talk, remember I am right next door.”

Kalina didn’t reply. Alinna walked away and left her sister to be alone. She didn’t want to make matters worse.


To be continued.....

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    • L.K. Egooh profile image

      L.K. Egooh 6 years ago from United States

      I cannot wait to see what happens next.

      This is very good and intriguing.

      L.K.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      L.K. I thank you very much it will come within the next couple of days :) Stay tuned....

      smiles :)

      bella

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      L.K. Egooh 6 years ago from United States

      Yay!!!

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      Sorry baby...Beautiful write...

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      L.K. >_<

      Billy Bear, For???

      smiles :)

      bella

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      Oh OK..mercifully my first comment didn't come through then...because I have to tell you that scene had me wanting to kill....You are the master writer baby, careful with our hearts and emotions, although I know you are...

      You have the power to write big time...incredible!!!

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Billy Bear, I may tug at your heart cords but I must write what my gut tells me and it was quite difficult to write this and it took me nearly 8 hrs. to do so.

      smiles :)

      bella

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      No please, please go girl.... I'll keep up...just remember me when they take me off to that rubber room..ha ha ha..

      You are my mentor baby...don't you ever pull a punch or be less than your capable of..

      I told you game on...full throttle all the way....

      I gotta tell you though, you and I are so after the monsters of the world, its not funny....

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      James W. Nelson 6 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Good job, Bella.

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      carolyn59 6 years ago from Gainesville, FL

      interesting...can't wait to read the next installment...sad

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is another intriguing chapter. The rape scene was vivid and written with style. Thank you.

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      shygirl2 6 years ago

      Aww...poor Kalina...how awful for her! I would be upset with my sis too, I think. What a horrible secret to bear. Your writing is wonderful bella. I know how much this type of writing can take from a person. Great job though! Looking forward to the next chapter, no matter what...or how sad?

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      Becky 6 years ago

      Just as good as 1 and 2. Waiting for more. Love this.

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      Bumpsysmum 6 years ago from Cambridgeshire

      I wasn't disappointed, keep up the good work, part 4 will be awaired with baited breath :-)

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      Jo_Goldsmith11 6 years ago

      great characters! really interesting read. Can't wait to read the continuation..voted up!

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      Radioguy 6 years ago from Maine

      Good stuff! You make the reader WANT to read on!

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Billy Bear, Good to know I have a partner in a business world :)

      Jim, Thank you learned from the best ;)

      Carolyn, Thank you a bit sad yes I agree a bit difficult to write as well. Once again thank you for reading and will have the 4th Part up soon...

      Always, Writing the rape scene was very hard reason being as a writer I had to become the character and feel what she felt it was something I couldn't imagine anyone going through but it was quite the challenge for me but I did the best I could. Thank you for reading the third part.

      Shygirl, It means a lot coming from a wonderful writer like yourself. It has taken a bit from me. It has drained a bit but I enjoy it very much. I have never been able to write in this form but you have truly inspired me. :)

      Becky, Thank you part 4 will be up soon I hope stay tuned.....

      Bumpsys, Woo hoo I am glad you weren't disappointed with me I wish to not disappoint anyone. Thank you!!!

      Jo, Thank you it is appreciated.

      Radio, I am very pleased to know that it drew you in. I will enjoy writing part 4 knowing that I will have a returning reader.

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      Nicely done! "she cried as he violated her essence with his filth" very descriptive and gives you the idea of the deed that was done, you can feel her terror and her anger. i would have put up a fight. mr conrad would be going down.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Nikki, I would have too, but her character not one for confrontation until this night which flipped her switch and her character a little darker from here on forward which will lead to more descriptive revenge towards those who have caused pain n hurt in her life ;)

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      What a filthy rotten ...I hate that guy. LOL. Wow, this is driving me nuts now. I can't wait for the next parts. I am totally hooked. What a great writer you are. I can sense the screws tightening in this story and tension maintained and growing ever more...

      You have a book just published, I saw on your profile...h'mmm. Wow. :)

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Astra, I am sorry lol. Yes I published my poetry book. I also thank you for the comments and praise sighs a relief of knowing there is enjoyment!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      saddlerider1 6 years ago

      Well written, sad events happen. I know of abuse and I know of girls who were violated and it hung like a yoke over their shoulders for many years. To shamed to speak of it, to hurt for being molested by such men is filth and detesting.

      Vermin like this continue to shame youth today and leave scars that really never heal. Their victims often suffer in loneliness. I pray her sister and family will show her love, for now she has to be alone. Lovely write Bella, I am intrigued and will jump to the next chapter.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Saddle, I have met a handful of females that have been violated. It saddens me that things like this happen but there is nothing we can do to make a difference which is pathectic. I thank you for stopping by and following my story.

      smiles :)

      bella

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      The are many things we can do to help from self-defense training for the young to a real system of empowering women to have a voice to teaching young men not only the right paths to take, but to warn of the most severe consequences of their actions...this shit is intolerable...and its continuing lack of resolution is incredibly pathetic...

      But let's not detract from Bella's incredible writing...keep going, baby...the world needs a lot of you!!!

      love you,

      bbear..

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      lol billy anything is possible!!

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