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The Ballerina and The Sad Violin Part 8

Updated on June 28, 2011

Alinna stood by as her eyes danced with fierce knowing she had taken something away once again from her sister. Santos squinted at Alinna like if he was trying to tell her something without words. Madame Noemi was peeking through the crack of the door from the studio trying to listen to what was going on. She heard Kalina's voice a bit hostile.

“Ah-Ahh, I wanted to tell you that ummm…..” Santos stuttered.

“Mr. Baldomero!” called Madame Noemi

“Yes” he replied.

“May I please see you in the studio” she asked.

“Sure, here I come.”

Kalina grabbed a hold of his hand and said “This doesn’t end here I want to know what you are keeping from me. “

“O-Ookay, Kalina let me finish up with Madame Noemi and I will be back shortly.”

Alinna stood with her arms crossed just looking at her sister with contentment.

“What are you looking at?” Kalina snapped

“At the soon to be look on your face” Alinna grunted.

“Why don’t you just do him the honor and just spill it already. What do you know and what truth does he need to tell me?” Kalina shouted.

“Shortly you will hear what needs to be told. Maybe you will realize that you will always be less than what I am and nothing more.”

Kalina’s eyes widened with hatred and anguish as Alinna spoke. She was done listening to the belittle talk. Kalina stood quiet her words wanting to lash out but she stood in silence.

“What’s a matter Kalina lost for words?”

Kalina held her silence, out walked Santos with Madame Noemi and called out to both of them “I have matters to attend, I will speak to both of you at a later time” and walked away in whispers with Noemi.

Kalina picked up her duffle bag that rested on the floor and walked for the front door.

Alinna stood back watching her sister leave immediately. She felt a sense of victory to see her sister walk away hurt.


“Okay, ladies," Madame Noemi said "There are a total of 5 auditioning for the lead in this year’s Grand Performance. In the order I call your name is the way you will audition, Abril, Bridget, Kory, Alinna, and Kalina. So, shall we start?”

Santos and Madame Noemi watched the ladies very closely as each one performed the same routine. Alinna and Kalina both were very graceful while they danced. He immediately knew it was going to be such a hard decision. Kalina carried a heart of gold and it showed in her movement. Alinna carried beauty and sensuality, both so different but the same.

“Okay that will conclude our auditions" said Santos "I thank you each for taking the time to audition and the lead will be posted this afternoon outside my door. Have a great day.”

Kalina walked off stage, as she was the last to perform, over to where Santos was sitting “Can we talk?” she asked softly.

“Sure Kalina, I will meet you outside, give me a sec.”

“Ok” she replied and walked up the aisle out into the theaters foyer. She turned around to see if he was exiting the theater when Alinna walked over to him and kissed him on the cheek. In turn he lent a smile. He turned and walked up towards the exit of the theater and took Kalina’s hand and told her to walk with him.

“Santos, tell me already. What truth was Alinna talking about?”

“Kalina, listen,” as he paused to think about what he wanted to say “when I saw you for the first time there was something about you that ignited within”

“Ok, I don’t understand?”

“I am gonna be flat out with you, your sister and I engaged in sexual relations. When you came knocking on my door she was in there with me. She came on to me and I just went with it. I never planned for it to happen at least with her.”

Kalina’s eyes filled with tears as she looked confused in what he was telling her.

“I-I don’t blame you, if someone as beautiful as her came on to me, if I was a man I would have done the same, but I thought you were different I guess I didn’t give it enough time to get to know the true you. No need to explain I get it I will back off and let you be” as she wiped the tears that flowed from her eyes.

“Kalina, wait listen let me talk….”

“No you have said enough Santos….No need for your empty words.”

Kalina devastated by what Santos told her. What was she to do her parents gone, rapped by a bum, the rivalry of her sister, and now a broken heart…

To be continued…..


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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Becky I am very sorry work has been hectic my muse vanished and I am barely recovering it from this hidden place it went. Please I ask do not be dissapointed I will bring part 9 shortly. Thanks for showing interest once again my apologies.... :)


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      Becky Katz 6 years ago from Hereford, AZ

      I came back to see if you had finished this yet. I guess not.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Becky, Thank you a bunch. You are right on track. :)

      Sneha, Yes I know that feeling of liking someone and having them taken from right under my nose :/


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      Sneha Sunny 6 years ago from India

      ohhhhhhh........poor kalina..... let's see what happens next.

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      Becky 6 years ago

      Good story. I do not like Alinna or Santos. He knew there was a problem between them and should have stayed out of it. Kalina has a lot of problems and i think her jealousy and hatred for her sister is going to cause big problems.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Sub, a few minor but thanks to you ;) I have never danced ballet but always wished I took dance in high school and was in drill team but never ballet I want my daughter to dance everything and to placy in every sport possible :)

      Writer, Oh wow rivalry not good well I hope all went well with your sister and is better now.

      Always, Santos is trying to have his cake and eat it too. Thanks Always you rock!!


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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Another great episode. I don't like Santos. kalina can do better. I'm into this!! I'll be back.


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      Joyce Haragsim 6 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Loved the pohoto of the bellarina.

      I remember my kid sister going through something like your story

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      James W. Nelson 6 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Saw some changes, Bella. Good job! Also, I had a feeling you might be into ballet. Love your pic.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Sub, I want to agree! Thank you for paying the visit!!


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      James W. Nelson 6 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Good job, Bella. You said once that you wren't sure which sister..."something," but I think Kalina is the most likeable, and Kalina should let her sister have Santos while she waits for someone better. Just my opinion. Beautiful ballet pic.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Shygirl, Like they say blood is thicker than water and only time can heal in this case. Who will rise and who will fall?? Thank you for reading.


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      shygirl2 6 years ago

      Sibling rivalry hurts more than any other betrayal...because it does involve family, who should be there for each other. Sad, but often true. I feel for Kalinna, but she is better off finding her own way without her sister for the time being, until all wounds heal and without Santos...a definitely weak man, in my opinion. Great write, bella. : )

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Nikki, She had a bit of feelings begining to develope but all out the window now. Alinna a user I agree.


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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      awww. i didnt know she really liked him like that. Alinna just using him.