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The Beauty of What You Would Do in the Dark

Updated on July 29, 2016

We Must Learn To Please Our Spouse

The beauty of what,

You would do in the dark,

Can be more beautiful,

In the righteous light,

The beauty of what,

You would do in the dark,

Can be justified,

With whom it is right,

The beauty of what

You would do in the dark,

Like your freaky love,

To your own wife,

The beauty of what,

You would do in the dark,

May be taught to each,

To shine each other’s life

Somebody's Watching You

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      Norine Williams 10 months ago

      Amen Flourish!

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      Dianna Mendez 10 months ago

      Marriage is beautiful and so much can be gained by communicating your thoughts -- even in the dark.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 10 months ago from The Caribbean

      "In the righteous light" it's not really dark, is it? Thanks for this poetic expression with a message that shines light on our intentions.

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      Surabhi Kaura 11 months ago

      Beautiful poem, Al. Nice message.

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      Dana Tate 11 months ago from LOS ANGELES

      Beautiful message in this poem.

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      manatita44 11 months ago from london

      Interesting. I always find you very brave, as well as artistic. How's the music business doing?

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      Faith Reaper 11 months ago from southern USA

      Hi Al, what a lovely and creative poem! Enjoyed reading.

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      FlourishAnyway 11 months ago from USA

      So many venture away from home when they have great things awaiting for them in their or dark bedrooms. Liked the poem!

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      Marlene Bertrand 11 months ago from Northern California, USA

      A wonderful message in this beautiful poem.

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      John Hansen 11 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi Al, this is a short but quite lovely piece of verse. What you would do in the dark. Well done.

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      Norine Williams 11 months ago

      All I could see is that you enjoy making "freaky love" to your wife and feel it is "beautiful!" lol

      I applaud you for that! MOST men don't know how to enjoy what's "theirs!" Hebrews 13:4 says "Marriage (a real Marriage as defined by GOD) is honourable in all, AND THE BED UNDEFILED: but whoremongers and adulterers GOD will judge."

      Enjoy!

      Blessings

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      Eric Dierker 11 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Excellent I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it.

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      Michael-Milec 11 months ago

      Beautifully said! (Beauty or not all is seen) "You are the light of the world. Let your light...'

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