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The Beauty of a Poem

Updated on July 06, 2013

Beautiful... so lavishing
Created by imagination
Written with great determination.


Fantastic... so real
Molding our talents
Revealing our fears and dreams.


Caressed by inspiration
Kissed by satisfaction
Watered by creation.


Poems are real
Showing affection,
Loneliness and happiness.


Crazy sometimes
Poems make a good way
To start life.


They are mysteries
Of life’s hidden desires
If you make a poem,


You’re truly one of a kind!


Makes me wonder,
Can I write one?


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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      snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      Nice words!

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      Ann-Christin 4 years ago from UK

      I can answer that yes you can definitely write poems I loved it :)

      Voted up and sharing.

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      Larry Wall 4 years ago

      "Makes me wonder if I can write one."

      Most assuredly the answer is yes. You have a rare talent, you should begin looking at the next level and see if you can turn this hobby into a career. I think you have the talent for it.

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      Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

      You most definitely can write them M. Beautiful words as always and I love the message. Voting this up, interesting, awesome, and beautiful :)

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      fjpteach 4 years ago from Humble, TX

      So true! Love the "Kissed by satisfaction."

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow! I got a lot of lovely messages!

      @Larry, you think so? I'm kinda 'don't know' how and what to write. Thank you so much for believing in me.

      @Snow, Christin, James, FP, my heart says thank you for these very beautiful comments!

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      You are a great poem writer, like the one above is amazingly good.

      Voted up and awesome, Joyce keep writing them out.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow, this is amazing! Thank you so much Joyce!

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      Sushmita 4 years ago from Kolkata, India

      Unknown spy, I am sure you no longer need an affirmation. A very interesting and vibrant poetic description of poem! Voted up..hmm, so you have written one. :)

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      Angela Brummer 4 years ago from Lincoln, Nebraska

      I love the kissed by satisfaction! Wow amazing! I will share this!

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      shalini sharan 4 years ago from Delhi

      beautiful indeed

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      myownlife 4 years ago from london

      so much entertaining poem, always loneliness gives us creations, beautifully composed,

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Your beautiful words linger in the ear like a soft touch of a woman on one's skin, you paint pictures with words like some grand master, that teases and pleases the senses, you are a poet at heart, you are M.

      Vote up and more !!!

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      unknown spy..you just did one...loved the words from your world..you have a knack for " flowing words "..very pretty word picture...

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      and when we must part

      I leave you this

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Sen, Sha, Myownlife, Kashmir, KJF, Mhatter,

      thanks much guys! I appreciate your beautiful comments! Oh I loved it. thanks again! (and for the votes, hehehe)

      Thanks for the Shared Angela!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      You wrote a beautiful one my friend....

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Ruby, that's soo sweet of you! thank you much much :)

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      Crazzy Kylex © 2012 4 years ago from Incredible India!

      Two words: Simply awesome. Wish I could steal your creative mind. How do you make such enticing poems? Is it your brain or your heart or your imagination?

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow, i give you my answer in 2 words:

      I'm Speechless.

      :) Thank you so much for this lovely message. it was born by chance. :)

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      Jonathan McCloskey 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

      This was both clever and fun, thanks for sharing this with us.

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      vespawoolf 4 years ago from Peru, South America

      Beautiful flow and word choices. You most definitely can!

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Poems are so magical in thought and able to transform a dismal day into bright ray of hope. Your use of words are excellent and shows your talent.

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      A.E. Williams 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

      Always a pleasure reading your work. :)

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      The anser is yes - you prove your wonderful ability with this. Magnificient.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Jon, Vespa, Teaches, Crazed, Shining Irish,

      thank you so much!! I really appreciate your beautiful kind words to me. Big hugs to you guys!

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      Annie Fenn 4 years ago from Australia

      Absolutely, Unknown Spy and you have captured the essence of poetry right here in you poem. Poems do reveal so much about us but also provide mystery as every interpretation is different and is based on the readers experience. Lovely poem about poetry. My votes and best wishes and sharing!!!

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      Vicki L Hodges 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      How cool your poem asked the question! And the answer is a resounded yes--you sure can! many votes and sharing!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Annie, thank you for the votes and Shared!

      Poems are our bestfriends. we tell our secrets to them and they hide it on methaporical world of theirs. and those people with the same secret can understand. hehe

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hehe thanks much Victoria! thank you so much for the votes and shared. Oh you're so sweet.

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      "Beautiful... so lavishing

      Created by imagination

      Written with great determination"

      Another great job M! Keep up the great work! :) An excellent way to describe a poem Voted up, awesome, and beautiful!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hehehe thanks J!!

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      You are welcome M! :)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      J, :P

      lol!

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      Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

      You certainly can!!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks so much Lesley!

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      Another beautiful poem of your Unknown spy, very imaginative, and creative indeed. I also love poetry and your style is short and sweet, nice!

      Voted up and just like the first one I read of yours, getting shared outside of this place known as hubpages.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Cloud!! I really appreciate your kind words and shared ^;^

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      unknown spy, poems indeed show our longings, desires, happiness, sadness, fulfilment, emptiness, craziness, soberness, elation,dejection, freedom, captivity, imagination, reality, ..... In fact, a whole gamut of human emotions are captured by a poet in an intensity which is not possible in prose with so few words.

      You have proved this here. You have a way with words.

      Voted up, beautiful and awesome.

      Shared it on fb and tweeted.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Rajan..what can I say..im speechless. This is very kind of you. So uplifting and so inspiring! Thank you much for the shared and tweet!!

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      Voronwe 4 years ago

      Nice poem. I like the ending especially...some /often writers walk between their vanity and insecurity, precariously balanced by these two forces. Also like "Poems are real', that's how I feel about the characters in my stories.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Voronwe. thank you for the beautiful comment...oh my.my ears are growing already...

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      PurvisBobbi44 4 years ago from Florida

      unknown spy,

      Anything from the heart of a person is beautiful to me. Your poem is lovely--- and yes I would guess you can compose and write about anything your heart desires.

      Have a great weekend.

      Your Hub Friend,

      Bobbi Purvis

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Bobbi,

      Thank you so much for this kind message!

      Hugs.

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      Lilly 4 years ago from Denmark

      Ahh an awesome poem about the beauty of poems. I'm so glad that we have poetry to express ourselves. What would we do without it?

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      QudsiaP1 4 years ago

      In my stint on hubpages I must have come across hundreds of poems but never once did I see a poem explaining the beauty of poetry itself. What a wonderful idea and you have expressed it beautifully.

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      JMCL162 4 years ago from New York

      I really liked the tone and style of this poem. "watered by creation" is my favorite line. shared and voted up!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      @Phelcky, thank you again! poetry is a way to express feelings, especially the deep ones you want to hide. :)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      QudsiaP1, thank you for this very wonderful comment. I am so glad that you like it.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi JM, all my thanks for your very kind message. Thank you so much for the shared, read, and votes!

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      Debby Bruck 4 years ago

      Dear Spy ~ Looks like everyone gave you the answer you were hoping to hear. Blessings, Debby

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Oh thank you much Debby!

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      oceansider 4 years ago

      I love your poem, well done M!

      Helen

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Helen! Thank you for the message!

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      Crazzy Kylex © 2012 4 years ago from Incredible India!

      "Can I write one" How far I know, This question is definitely not applicable to someone called Unknown Spy, and also Snowdrops.

      Great poem, again, Spy! Wish I could write such poems everyday.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      can i say thank you 100x? you really got me Kylex! (cute*) Thanks so much!

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Yes, you can write a poem, Spy. And so, so beautiful! Keep 'em coming.....

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Whew!! brave, your soo sweet!! love you!

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Backacha, Spy! :-)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      brave!! whew, nice to see you! :)

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      You surely have one beautiful one here spy... wonderful poem :)

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      T.B Whitt 4 years ago from the Philly area

      You're truly one of a kind... I love that line because truly each of us is one of a kind. Great poem

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      You encapsulated all the feelings I have had throughout my journey with poetry, thank you. Jamie

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      To Rah, Whittwrites, Jamie,

      All my thanks to you guys, I really appreciate your kind words.

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      Vincent Moore 4 years ago

      Well Spy I would call this a poem, your not suffering from this phobia at all? lol Definitely a beautiful piece.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hahaha you've made me l-o-l on your comment :)

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