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The Best and Worst Thing My Teacher Ever Taught Me About Writing

Updated on August 5, 2012
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As a child, I was a voracious writer. I journalled, wrote creative stories and composed elaborate letters to family members. Looking back, I realize that I enjoyed writing then for the same reasons I enjoy it now. It's the joy of crafting something, and in the process escaping into a meditative state.

Some things that our childhood school teachers say stay with us our whole lives. I remember for one assignment writing a story about a night at the movies with my parents - an exciting experience for my eleven-year-old self. My teacher’s comment was: “Tara you are such a great writer. When I saw the topic of the story I wasn't expecting it to be very interesting - but it was!”

Impression 1: the topic you write about matters, but so does how you write about it.

Sometime later in the year, I showed the same teacher a story I had written for fun and she asked me:

“But what’s the point of it?” As a kid I could tell that this was a special moment in which an adult was talking to me on an adult level. I saw that it wasn't a dismissive question, my teacher was probing me to become a more critical writer. But I was mortified and confused; I had no idea writing had to fulfill a purpose!

Impression 2: your writing has to have an articulable point.

Whether you're writing non-academic reflection pieces, autobiographical accounts, adventure stories and fantasy, or writing academic articles and research papers, asking yourself "what is the point" of this piece can be both useful and hurtful to your writing.

I find the question "What is the point?" helps in my writing process.

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Why it was the Best Thing a Teacher Ever Taught Me

  1. When shaping an academic piece, a writer must always keep in mind the ultimate question they are trying to answer. I have a friend who says that whenever she wrote papers for school – from a simple report to her Masters thesis – she kept her research question on a sticky note above her computer. This guides the research process, keeps the flow of the writing coherent, and leads the piece to a strong conclusion.
  2. Even for non-academic writing pieces, asking yourself: “what is the point” can be useful. Let’s say, for example, you’re composing a nature-writing piece in which you want to really convey the emotion of a landscape. But you find that you’re not using peaceful adjectives, the piece has started to become more heavily focused on your internal thoughts, or you spend too much time describing the river when really it was the snow covered fields that captured your attention. Asking “what is the point” directs your writing. Through the process of asking yourself this question, and comparing it to what you’ve already written, you may find that the “point” is actually something other than what you thought it was.
  3. Maybe you think that the “point” of your writing is to publish something that attracts as many readers as possible. I would argue that this is not the "point," this is a goal for your end piece. To target the point, ask yourself what you want individual readers to come away with after reading your piece.

Example: “I’m going to write about an awkward teenage girl who realizes that her life’s destiny is to become a sexy vampire. Thus giving awkward girls around the world hope that something bigger and better is out there waiting for them."

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Why it was the Worst Thing a Teacher Ever Taught Me

  1. Starting the writing process with this thought: “but what is the point?” can be a recipe for writers' block. While later in the writing process it can help you to shape your paper/article, etc..., it strangles the creative flow. Many writers craft their pieces by throwing ideas onto paper, and seeing where the spontaneous creativity takes them. The “point” of the piece can thus evolve, and turn into something much more meaningful as research comes together and ideas emerge.
  2. When writing a more academic piece with a solid research question (Why are GMOs bad? Do I Need a Degree in Journalism? How can the Farm Bill be Revised?) the “point” of the piece seems to be relatively clear. But if you’re like me, then there’s always a part of you that doubts whether this is a question that really needs to be asked, whether there are more important questions I should be spending my time on, and what difference will it make anyways if it gets published – will anyone even read it after all?! With such a slew of “what is the point" thoughts, it makes the whole writing process feel burdensome.
  3. The ultimate “point” of any piece of writing can just be to tell a story. It’s been studied: story telling is as old a practice as the caveman. Human societies use stories to reinforce their culture, as stories get shared they become part of a mass psyche that unites us under a similar world view. We are enamored by stories. If you’ve ever read story books aloud to children, some supernatural phenomenon happens that turns a room full of screaming toddlers into a circle of spellbound angels.
  4. Even if it's not in typical "story form," writing serves to fill an important cultural and psychological human need to share our human existence. Take biographies for example: we are curious about other peoples’ lives. And how satisfying it is to read about a fictional character’s emotions, and be able to relate to them exactly. Reading or writing about the news is a way of sharing what is happening around the world, to people like and unlike ourselves. If we are too caught up in "what is the point" of sharing this or that story, we may not share at all.

How Do You Overcome "What is the point?" Fears?

If it’s an academic piece, feel secure in the fact that your piece will add to the quilt of research that is out there. In some way your unique take on a question will add to the fabric. Someone will read your piece when they won’t read others, or be inspired by one or two sentences that you really nailed.

If it’s a non-academic, story-telling piece, then remember: the point of any story is to simply exist. We have a human need to share our experiences and emotions with others, just as much as we innately desire to read about others experiences.

This brings me back to the lesson I learned from my teacher's first comment: What you write about matters, but so does how you write about it. So writers, write well and with passion, and never doubt that your craft serves a purpose!

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      Jordan Hake 4 years ago from Southwest Missouri, USA

      I agree with this hub. A lot of writing I see out there is just people catching words and tossing them together with a glue called grammer, but it takes real effort to create something with meaning.

      Well done!

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      cardelean 4 years ago from Michigan

      I love number 3, the ultimate point of any writing can be just to tell a story. There is absolutely nothing wrong with that. However, it is important that writers understand the audience for whom they are writing for and keep that in mind as they craft their piece. I can see how that comment would be such a dual sided learning experience for you. Thank you for sharing this personal experience and how you learned from it.

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      watergeek 4 years ago

      If I do brainstorming first, even for non-fiction how-to articles, passion is infused into it. Brainstorming helps me sort out the subtopics, too. It's during my first edit that I find "sticking to the point" most important. It helps me take out fluff and get more concise, while still keeping the momentum.

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      Tara McNerney 4 years ago from Washington, DC

      Teresa I agree that the passion should shine through great writing. But I'm curious about other hubbers' experience: do you ever find that sometimes the articles you are most passionate about get fewer comments than an article you just whipped together?

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      India Arnold 4 years ago from Northern, California

      A really good lesson for keeping your writing point to the point! Nice information for new writers, as well as a refresher for tenured authors.

      Cheers~

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      Teresa Coppens 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Have a point of view and a message but most importantly show your passion for your subject or you will lose your audience from the start!

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      LifeInPrint101 4 years ago from Scotland, United Kingdom

      Great hub! I often arrive at "what is the point?" fears before having actually started writing, but I didn't realise then. I tend to write non-academic pieces, and it's great to hear that there is no point, or rather, that writing in itself is the point!

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      Tara McNerney 4 years ago from Washington, DC

      cclitgirl I bet you were a great teacher! I can just imagine those kids with spellbound eyes. Adults become the same way too - we just don't have the opportunity to have story time as much sadly.

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      Cynthia Sageleaf 4 years ago from Western NC

      Very cool! I love the part about something "supernatural happens to a room-full of toddlers" - that is so true. When I was a teacher, I used to love reading stories to the kids - I'd make every character come to life. The kids would beg me to tell them stories. :D What fun!

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      Tara McNerney 4 years ago from Washington, DC

      Nifwlseirff that's a really good point to also bring up: in creative writing pieces, sometimes the "point" is meant to be elusive, and that's what creates the emotion. It also lets different people interpret the meaning differently!

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      Kymberly Fergusson 4 years ago from Villingen Schwenningen, Germany

      When writing a non-fiction piece, having the 'point' somewhere visible certainly helps, especially in the outlining phase.

      For creative pieces, I like to write towards a goal - a feeling that I want the audience to walk away with - helps the piece flow more easily. Although I know that people will feel different things -- one English teacher at my school was horrified and scared at one creative assignment I submitted, but the others thought it was sad and poignant.

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      Keeley Shea 4 years ago from Norwich, CT

      Great hub and a great reminder to have a point when writing and focus on it!

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      robes 4 years ago

      Thanks for the read!

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      Donna Hilbrandt 4 years ago from Upstate New York

      There is definitely a difference between academic and non-academic writing, but random, stream of conciousness writing is often pointless to read. I wrote an article for teachers to get this idea across about using the PEE Principle, which requires the writing to have a point. Check it out if you like.

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      Joshua Patrick 4 years ago from Texas

      billbuc is right (as usual), all writers can benefit from the advice in this hub. Voted up, across, and shared!

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I hope this is read by many because there are quite a few who need to absorb this message. Writing must have a point and a message...otherwise it is just scribbling on a page. Well done!

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