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The Broken promises

Updated on November 8, 2011
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How could you

Destroy me

And left me all alone

Lying in the floor


I’m falling to pieces

My world crumbles when you walk away

I don’t know where to look

I have to find my self


I don’t know what to do

Confuse

I’m losing my faith

I got to hold on of what is left


You promise

You and me for ever

Now you’re gone

And I’m all alone


It takes for ever

For me to be okay

I wish your still here with me

I don’t know what to do with my life


Waiting for your call

Hoping you will knock on my door again


One day

You’ll feel sorry

Someday I won’t need you anymore


I'm better off without you

I'm stronger than you think


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      PADDYBOY60 6 years ago from Centreville Michigan

      Very nice. Voted up and beautiful.

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      mondkill 6 years ago

      I know I'm just starting my journey, just starting to see the world. Thanks you so much for the lovely comment marcojour...

      Glad to know your my friend... have a sunny day...

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      Maria Jordan 6 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      I'm better off without you,

      I'm stronger than you think.

      Dearest mondkill,

      This was a "work it out" piece to me. I believe that we all have the answers we need all within our very hearts ...(you know that Dorothy/ Oz reference, "you've had it all along").

      You are finding out some heartwrenching answers at a very tender age. You have an amazing amount of life ahead of you with endless possibilities for yourself. My darling, please feel sad while you need to but NOT for yourself... for YOU have so much to offer, so much yet to stretch towards... like the sky for example!

      I am excited to see where your journey takes you and you have a friend in me, mar.

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      mondkill 6 years ago

      @ Debby Bruck - Yes your right Debby, thanks for visiting my hub...

      May you have a bless wonderful day...

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      Debby Bruck 6 years ago

      To find a friend, it seems, you have to be a friend. This may not be so easy, either. Blessings, Debby

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      mondkill 6 years ago

      @ Blessed53 - Yes I just follow you and thanks for visiting my hub and thanks for your kind comment...

      God is the answer to everything, god will never leave us no matter what we do...

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      mondkill 6 years ago

      @Asma - glad you have time to visit my hubs...

      Thanks for commenting...

      Best wishes....

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      Blessed53 6 years ago from Dalton, Georgia

      Just found out you started following me and appreciate it so wanted to check out your site. Love can be sweet and bitter but never lose yourself because God is always with you and will never leave you! When one door closes, another opens. Keep the faith.

      Blessings,

      Always, in all ways, to God the honor and glory!

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      asmaiftikhar 6 years ago from Pakistan

      stronger than you think.really beautiful and life never stops on any stop.

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      mondkill 6 years ago

      Yes I know I'm lot stronger than I think, But I think I don't have a true friend. It's hard to find a true friend now a days. Thanks for such a wonderful advice "Debby Bruck".

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      mondkill 6 years ago

      Yes I know I'm lot stronger than I think, But I think I don't have a true friend. It's hard to find a true friend now a days. Thanks for such a wonderful advice "Debby Bruck".

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      mondkill 6 years ago

      @Derdiru - Hi and thanks again for stopping by here. Thanks for the wonderful comment... :)

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      Debby Bruck 6 years ago

      Mondkill ~ You are definitely stronger than you think. Continue the journey of life, don't give up. Find friends and family who can hold you and support you through the grief and anger. Blessings, Debby

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      Derdriu 6 years ago

      Mondkill: What a courageous, relentless expression of determination in the face of emotional betrayal!

      Thank you, voted up, etc.,

      Derdriu