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When Love Comes

Updated on May 3, 2013
Love is like flowers with its beautiful blossoms.
Love is like flowers with its beautiful blossoms. | Source

Where we collect smiles and tears

Where hearts collide together for years

Yearns with hopes that forever grows

Belonging together is like a chain with flows

Where smiles mold and spread

Where we seek greatness against all odds

Thought so, we shed all just for all

Because we smile when love comes before fall

Where tears sparks in the eye of joy

Where eyes can’t stop smiling by.

A smile in the eye when love comes to fly,

Cause not all tears are suffering and blind

Where speaking of truth strengthens for love

Where we tender each word that blend,

Words that keep all places intact like a sword, so

Strong, bold, genuine and light

Bright as the sun, that can’t be seen or felt,

But, with love, rainy days is like usual as done.

Our mind and heart make wars at times

We decide whether who wins with primes

When heart rise, tears and regrets sometimes,

When mind, tears and more regrets always comes that time

Not all right and not all are wrong

It is up how we choose

The right and proper is different

But when love come?

You better think twice cause it always been blind.


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      denden mangubat 4 years ago from liloan, cebu, philippines

      nice poem

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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 4 years ago from Philippine


      - love is fun, and heart whelming, same way its been the best heart killer. So, as what I've seen and experienced that line surely fits right? those ouch ouchee pain when love starts to mess up. So, people must thing twice, brain and heart must be united on a concrete action.

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      Deonne Anderson 4 years ago from Florence, SC


      Love your expressions of LOVE from your prospective. I like your statement that when love comes, you better think twice as love is blind. I have found that to be true many times in my younger life. Had I thought twice I might have saved myself a lot of heartache!! Ah! love.....

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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 4 years ago from Philippine


      - oh Cat, thank you!!!!!! receiving such bold comment with the word PERFECT just made my day! I am not sure if real love truly work that way since, I still consider things pretty much as like teenage puppy love sort of way. Except for some who I truly been in-loved despite the fact that we never had been dating or even knowing what I feel towards that person. (I am such a weak guy when in-love haha)

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York


      Aww, I didn't know you had it in you! How sweet and beautiful! I love it, it's perfect!


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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 4 years ago from Philippine


      -well thank you glad you like it. Hope to write more wonderful poems.


      - yes, in love we become so foolish that sometimes right and wrong were at risk. Anyway,God made us perfect if we only work it out great. And choosing is one. Thank you

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Love is blind in some ways, but we still have the power of choice. I like your poem and the way you have written it.

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      kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Very nice poem Paolo!

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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 4 years ago from Philippine

      Sweet Epistles

      - I am so happy you've liked it! though, I am sure it wasn't the real love but in my experience I think I am on the right track finding it out what truly it is. about the line: not all tears are suffering and blind. I actually meant to do that since it is so real in relationships. Thanks again.

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      June 4 years ago from From the Heart of God

      Nicely put together words of love from a young man.

      I like what you said.."not all tears are suffering and blind"...keep writing!