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The Commute: A Poem

Updated on November 14, 2012

The Commute

If God cut you off on your commute

Would you pull up beside Him

Roll down your window

Tell Him about Himself

Honk til your rage is satisfied

You must be important

Going nowhere fast

When lightning strikes

Your bucket of bolts

And you survive

Do you throw caution

To the wind

Banking on the odds

Of getting struck twice

When the road ascends

Into the sky

Will you be afraid?

Parked on the shoulder

For eternity

Worried about life

Will you drive

Towards the light?

PWIV

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      A great poem which I vote up and share.I now look forward to so many more.

      Eddy.

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      Innuentendre 4 years ago from Houston, Texas

      Thank you Eddy! Many more to come..

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      Sommer Dalton 4 years ago

      Voted up plus 2! Loved the contrast and creativity!

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      Innuentendre 4 years ago from Houston, Texas

      sweet! thanks SommerDalton!!

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