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The Couch

Updated on March 1, 2011
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Here so completely

With one foot out the door

I breath a sigh when I hear

Familiar foot falls exit


Your cold motor groans


I safely rise scurrying my chicks

Out from the warmth of my wings

Sleepy breakfast eyes don’t notice

Blanket and pillows neatly stacked


A single night

A ruse of 

Propriety and currency

Becomes five times thirty


Suspended in time 

And geography

Displaced by this 

Economy


Until an opportunity for

Permanency


But what of propriety

And currency-- 

Of one foot out the door?



I understand completely



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      MrDSpade2 

      7 years ago

      Damn, i was way off, i envy that guy, for those five months i mean, lol...

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      No DrDSpade, not a one night stand. More of a couch surfing situation that went on for 5 months. Glad you liked it though.

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      MrDSpade2 

      7 years ago

      An interesting poetic describition of a one night stand, hopefully i'm right if not, i still enjoyed the read...

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks Enigmatic for always wonderful comments :)

    • Enigmatic Me profile image

      7 years ago from East Coast Canada

      I like it all Randy... no fear. Of all the hubs I've visited, I never leave yours for wanting more.

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Oh I'm so glad Genna. Don't think this one hits home with many.

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      Genna East 

      7 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Wow...this is great. I got it; was right there. Well done! Up and awesome.

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Yeah, old old lady with kids CC :)

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      ralwus 

      7 years ago

      Gee, I dint know you had an alter ego let alone kids. LOL I thought you were an old lady. hehe xox CC write on dear one.

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Sorry misunderstood you. Published something light and silly you might like.

    • Enigmatic Me profile image

      7 years ago from East Coast Canada

      No, not at all... more of a comment on society... my apologies for this.

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks for reading crystolite.

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      Emma 

      7 years ago from Houston TX

      Nice poem.thanks bravo.

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks Tom, your smile makes me happy.

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      Tom Rubenoff 

      7 years ago from United States

      Your work always makes me smile.

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Enigmatic, does this poem imply I'm living in the past? I strive daily to bloom where I'm planted I assure you.

    • Enigmatic Me profile image

      7 years ago from East Coast Canada

      Moment by moment

      Just being in the moment

      Its where mind and soul exist

      If we suspend time(live in the past) we don't ever live a life experienced...rather one that forever thirsts for something that may not ever come.

      The pain and sorrow we live through isn't without its purpose....sometimes we just need to lift the shade and learn to hide with in the sunny days... not hide from them.

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Showing an overly protective mother perhaps.

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      Jess Killmenow 

      7 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

      Road markers, these memories, back on the past path, showing progress, detours, learning, adventure - Thank you

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Ahhh bbnix you have explained the recession! A donut when it is a luxury taste 10x better than the ones you can afford to eat everyday. Some times life is "in" the relief. Thanks for that :)

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      bbnix 

      7 years ago from Southern California

      Very nice Randy.

      You are so good at placing us in your moment. One can feel the tension and with you as you gather your "sleepy eyed chicks."

      It feels like an old Brando movie, but real life where where we share the pain of no resources, no solutions, and only dismay amongst brief moments of minor relief.

      I love it....

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      I spill a lot of beans in my in my poetry Tara. Thank god for my alter ego, LOL.

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      Tara Tufford 

      7 years ago from Columbus, Ohio

      Wow RB! Pretty cool point of view of something that people in my experience usually keep on the "hush, hush".

      I liked it!

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Hi Mentalist. Something like that.

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      Mentalist acer 

      7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Left alone I can now start the day.;)

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      He'd sneak out of the house before my kids were up and I'd hear his car start, that was my "the coast is clear" signal.

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      Nancy Hinchliff 

      7 years ago from Essex Junction, Vermont

      I think I get this. But what about: "your cold motor groans." ???

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