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Mist in my Eyes

Updated on March 1, 2013


No... Men don't cry

I wouldn't cry.... for you

It was just mist in my eyes

that made them ..

swollen and blue


Do you think I care...

that I really loved you

My heart is cold now

nothing to say...nothing to do


I awoke...

in the middle of the night

was i scared....

or just fake fright

You hurt me just enough....

to make me want the pain

Now drown me with pleasure...

like a flower... that needs rain


The name of romance

in my life..I pine

sweet baby.. my chosen lover,

you are so fine

Pull me close to your heart..

let me make you..

mine









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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you for the kind words Lisa, i love your work also.

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      Lisa Williams 4 years ago

      This is absolutely beautiful and well written! I could really feel the emotion as I read! Thanks for posting.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks for the visit Caroline .!

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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Beautiful poem full of romance. :)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Lara, thank you for the follow and the comment. keep writing my friend.

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      larakern 4 years ago from Georgia

      I love this poem! I can feel the sadness and despair ringing through each line. I voted up!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Anne, Ferdinando, what a beautiful name . thank you for the comment .

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      Anne Ferdinando Perera 4 years ago from Colombo

      hey, your poems are wonderful:-)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Torrilynn, thank you for the comment ..!

      @ acaetnna,thank you for the visit and the comment.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Men do cry and it is truly special to be able to comfort the man that I love. What a beautiful, emotional poem. I love it.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      Hi cleaner3,

      thanks for such a beautiful

      and insightful hub that really

      helped to take me on a journey of

      how you feel or felt at that time.

      voted up.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Rosemay..!

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Indeed men cry too... beautiful poem Michael.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @Full ofLove sites, thank you for the follow and the comment

      @Wayne thank you for comment ..

      @bill, thank you my friend for the conmment and the visit.

      @Kamalesh, thank you for the comment .

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @dghbrh..thank you for visit and the comment

      @ James , thanks for the comments

      @Eddi , to have you give me praise humbles me ..for your work is outstanding.thank you

      @Faith reaper , thank you my loyal friend ..god bless you

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      Kamalesh050 4 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Oh what an Excellent poem my friend! Look forward to reading a lot more. Voted Up & Awesome.

      Best Wishes, Kamalesh

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Very nice my friend. I like the poetry side of you.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Beautiful and powerful.

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      FullOfLoveSites 4 years ago from United States

      I can feel the heartbreak in this poem. So lovely and poignant. Voted up and beautiful. :)

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very expressive as to the pain of love and the yearning for it to be returned. Love this one, so passionate and real.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      So beautiful Michael;you are indeed gifted and I am so glad to have the chance to share that gift.

      Here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

      Eddy.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Wow This is a beautiful piece of writing .I give you a standing ovation and thanks so much for the poem.Up

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      So nice and delicate it is ! The very first line and you just hit the interest button high and bright.....

      '....No... Men don't cry...'

      Thank you for this one. I am sharing and votes up way.