The Cycle of the Old Woman in the Shoe
The Cycle of the Old Woman in the Shoe
"There was an old woman who lived in a shoe
She had so many children she didn’t know what do to
So she gave them some broth without any bread
And she whipped them all soundly and sent them to bed"
The first baby came when she was fifteen
Old enough to indulge in passions and power plays
But too young to be as terrified as she should have been
And after only eighteen months of up-all-night
Crying
And feeding
And growing
And screaming
The next baby came along
Seventeen with two kids and no high school diploma
Food on the table with the help of food stamps
But she never wanted to be a welfare mom
Fake ID, push-up bra, false self confidence
She worked the pole and the booth and got off of welfare
But she wasn’t really proud
She was just surviving
Three years later
Toddlers clinging on
Another on the way
Work dried up
Desperation creeping in
Helplessness settled over her
And she simply gave up
Settled into an apartment with this guy and that
Too many screaming children usually drove them away
Resentments piled upon resentments
Thirty years old
Eight children clamoring to be fed
The youngest has leaky diapers because the good ones cost too much
One needs braces, another wore straight through his shoes on that skateboard again
And the woman doesn’t know what to do
Thirty years old
And she feels ancient
So when her daughter comes home
Fifteen and pregnant and not nearly as scared as she should be
The woman loses all control
Grabs her by the hair and shakes her silly
Drags her into the dimly lit bathroom
That nine people should never try to share
Grabs a hairbrush that has seen more than its share
Of lice and dandruff and disease
And beats the baby out of her
Just like having children beat her own life away
About the Poem
This poem comes from a series of poems that I have written. Throughout most of the series, I take the words of an original well-known nursery rhyme and sprinkle them throughout the page, adding on my own words to alter the meaning of the nursery rhyme. In this case, however, I felt like the words of the original nursery rhyme stood on their own to reflect exactly the image that I had in mind for the rest of the poem so I excerpted the quote from the original piece at the start of the poem.
This series of poems is all about the children that I used to work with when I spent several years doing social service work. I worked with children in the foster care system as well as in a group home setting. I also worked at Child Protective Services. In that setting, I didn’t just work with the children but also worked closely with the parents in the system and got to really see first hand how the cycle of abuse and neglect perpetuates itself from generation to generation. That’s what this poem is about.
I was unsure about sharing this poem in such a public setting. The imagery of much of this series is stark and ugly but it’s not always as raw and overt as this one. The truth is, though, that the situation of child abuse is very, very ugly and there’s no good way to sugarcoat that so I decided to go ahead and share this.
I will say, however, that the original formatting of the poem on the page had to be altered and I think that it has slightly affected the delivery of the poem in a negative way. The original has various spacing and changes in line alignment that I couldn’t make work in the constraints of the Hub format. Nevertheless, I hope the intention of the poem comes through.