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The Day I Left You
The day that I left you it was sunny not a cloud in the sky,
no rain to fall like teardrops , a perfect day to say goodbye.
You had to know it was coming, I told you so many times.
You just didn't listen, you played deaf, dumb and blind.
The day that I left you, you started crying, you kept asking me why.
There was nothing I could tell you all my own tears have run dry.
The day that I left you, I left behind all my fears.
A new life has begun for me, I'm reclaiming all the lost years.
The day that I left you, was the best day of my life,
except for the day I became your wife.
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I somehow missed you and never returned a visit. So very sorry since you look like a very good writer. This certainly is.
Polly
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Thanks so much. The ending is kind of ironic.
WOW! excellent and touching.
I too liked the ending.
Chris
very meaningful!
i love you
So moving. I hope you're well now Chris.
Beautiful and Poignant!
Very touching poem-I hope you are keeping well.
a beautiful truth filled poem,
I always enjoy reading peoms and i think this is a very good one.Please visit one of my hubs and leave a comment
I loved the ending. Good poem.
I do hope you are going on with your life. I know that leaving someone you love is sad, but sometimes it must be. I've followed you for over a year and am aware of your pain. God Bless you.
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