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The Day I Left You

Updated on July 14, 2011

The day that I left you it was sunny not a cloud in the sky,

no rain to fall like teardrops , a perfect day to say goodbye.

You had to know it was coming, I told you so many times.

You just didn't listen, you played deaf, dumb and blind.

The day that I left you, you started crying, you kept asking me why.

There was nothing I could tell you all my own tears have run dry.

The day that I left you, I left behind all my fears.

A new life has begun for me, I'm reclaiming all the lost years.

The day that I left you, was the best day of my life,

except for the day I became your wife.


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    • Pollyannalana profile image

      Pollyannalana 5 years ago from US

      I somehow missed you and never returned a visit. So very sorry since you look like a very good writer. This certainly is.


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      christalluna1124 5 years ago from Dallas Texas

      Thanks so much. The ending is kind of ironic.

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      Chris Merritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana

      WOW! excellent and touching.

      I too liked the ending.


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      brandyBachmann 5 years ago

      very meaningful!

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      ojoazul3 6 years ago

      i love you

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      So moving. I hope you're well now Chris.

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      dashingscorpio 6 years ago

      Beautiful and Poignant!

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      itakins 6 years ago from Irl

      Very touching poem-I hope you are keeping well.

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      K.A.E Grove 6 years ago from Australia

      a beautiful truth filled poem,

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      d-richie93 6 years ago

      I always enjoy reading peoms and i think this is a very good one.Please visit one of my hubs and leave a comment

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      jm72writes 6 years ago from Missouri

      I loved the ending. Good poem.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I do hope you are going on with your life. I know that leaving someone you love is sad, but sometimes it must be. I've followed you for over a year and am aware of your pain. God Bless you.