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The English Rose and her Lover - Act 1 scene 2

Updated on January 11, 2012

Act 1 Scene 2

My friends, this is the second part of the hub which I started yesterday., 10.1.12 Please note that it does contain some narrative of a sexual nature. This is the second part of the challenge which a fellow writer, from another site, has extended to me. I do not wish to offend anyone reading this hub, so please understand that I consider it a worthwhile adventure into Creative Writing. A genre that I don't usually indulge in. Writers are who we are, and if we shy away from the task of an uncomfortable write, how will we ever progress and perfect our skill?

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The Man's Response

You must understand that an English Rose such as I, am a beautiful and rare thing. I can be nurtured and loved, but also allowed to run wild and free, entwining the hedgerow, where my stems and thorns can hold on through the most gusting of winds. My petals are like silk and bow to the seasons at will, but strike where the wall crumbles, and the picture is entirely different. Vulnerable and scarred by the rain that fell too heavily down my stem.

“Sush my love, time is just a passing moment of desire. We have all the time of the day, and I will treat you fine, so as you do not fade away, into nothing.”

“Come feel my heart beat, as free as the rambling rose herself, but wait, I hear the whisper of a butterflies wings search my soul for answers.”

“Oh my sweet, my honey pot of sheer delight, wait until I can free you. Treat your petals with such tender touch and gentle kisses as to send you wild in a frenzy in a torrent of water, spilling over the stones of the waterfall beneath.”

The lover is eager to stay the distance and not approach the crumbling wall, least his desire be lost in the restraint, of the dark green foliage of wanton desire. Yet, still the sun shines on the spectacular blue hue from the carpet of lushness and bluebells beneath. He continues;

“I am but a prisoner in the soft grotto behind your lips while I moan beneath you with insatiable longing. I would take myself, releasing the salty streams of that primordial sea of life, upon the shoreline of your breasts and ebb down in soft pools in the hollows of your body. I reach between your temples with a probing digit, following the soft, yielding petals of the waiting honeysuckle and dip my digit into it. Oh my love, you taste of silken nectar.”

Not content with this modest morsel, I move my mouth to the source of her blossom and with a well-practiced tongue, softly row the waiting boat as if on a quiet pond on a summer night.”

But on this tranquil evening, the storm clouds gather in her loins, slowly, but insistently, crackling with the gathering energy of the storm. I offer my digits further to assist, first rimming the entrance to her majestic cave, and with a swift motion, try to gauge its inner depth. The landscape of her form trembles, and she is lost, a prisoner to the incandescent explosions of that fiery caldera that releases and contracts around three wonderful digits, twisting like a wanton sailor denied a woman for an entire season at sea. She screams for mercy but I ravage her over and over until she collapses the opening of a bud beneath the flurry of petals.

Act 1 Scene 3 to follow.


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    • A.A. Zavala profile image

      Augustine A Zavala 

      7 years ago from Texas

      Well ladies, I'm sorry to say that I must pass. My employer does background checks on me, and they know I write. I don't want them to know or discover anything that could cause me problems. Hubpages isn't too friendly to the genre either. Maybe I will get brave enough to share a story under another pen name on another site. If I remember correctly, Epi is the mack daddy of cheeky humor and naughty epigrams. Maybe he will step up?

    • thebluestar profile imageAUTHOR

      Annette Donaldson 

      7 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hi Martie, I struggled to think of anything else not vulgar to replace digits with lol, so I am stuck with them. The man's reply in this piece of writing is actually, the man's reply! Just taking the chance to be a creative writer too. Thank you for reading again hunnie. x

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      Martie Coetser 

      7 years ago from South Africa

      Digits? (A finger or toe in human beings or corresponding body part in other vertebrates.) Cannot help but smile for this one, Annette. Never thought this word could be applied.)

      Mmm, this is quite a poetic description of the scene...

      I like the word 'ravage'.


    • thebluestar profile imageAUTHOR

      Annette Donaldson 

      7 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Thank you Augustine, are not one of the beautiful men, you included, going to take on the challenge of replying with a male prospective. Poor Martie and I do not want to be alone. Our lovely Joyce (writer 20) has written a beautiful poem too recently. Here's waiting for the reply lol

    • A.A. Zavala profile image

      Augustine A Zavala 

      7 years ago from Texas

      Net, feeling amorous? Very tasteful and lustful.

    • thebluestar profile imageAUTHOR

      Annette Donaldson 

      7 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hi Maria, thank you so much for the lovely kind and encouraging comment. I haven't found this piece easy to write, as I wanted to convey love for the beautiful emotion that it is. I am always so grateful to you for our friendship, that is beautiful too. x

    • thebluestar profile imageAUTHOR

      Annette Donaldson 

      7 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Ruby, thank you hunnie for such a compliment. I believe that the love between two people should never be vulgar, and would never attempt to write that way. Although this was a challenge from a friend, I wanted love and longing to be described beautifully. I hope that I achieved it in some small way. x

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      Maria Jordan 

      7 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Dear Annette,

      I am deliriously happy at the blossoming of your writing style. Your words are filled with passion, longing, tenderness and you have a most inspirational muse in that gorgeous head of yours, that's for darned sure!

      I will be following to see where you take your loyal readers. Voted UP & Beautiful.

      Much love, Maria

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Net, You are a really gifted writer. You are able to write sensual lines without being vulgar. You open the reader's psyche. I had a lot of fun with my comments on the first scene, i think we all did..Ready for the next scene...Well done...

    • thebluestar profile imageAUTHOR

      Annette Donaldson 

      7 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hi Ian, welcome to the hub space of the blue star, I am pleased to see you, and thank you very much for your encouraging comment. Net:)

    • thebluestar profile imageAUTHOR

      Annette Donaldson 

      7 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hi Joyce,

      Thank you once again for your support my friend. I truly appreciate it. x

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      Ian D Hetri 

      7 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Hot and raw... brings out such a powerful passion in me..its wonderful. Voted up.

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      Joyce Haragsim 

      7 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Wow! This is a great 2nd part.


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