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"The Essence of women"

Updated on January 6, 2012

"The Essence of women"

God formed and created women, from the rib of Adam.
God formed and created women, from the rib of Adam.

"The Essence of Women"

The Essence of Women"

God formed and created women, all on his own.

From Adams ribs and precious bones.

Women to man, is a precious and a priceless stone.

In man's eye sight she can never do wrong.

Women is the air that man breathe

And all the unreachable goals he achieves.

Women is the constant beating of man's heart.

A new beginning and a new start.

Women is the essence of man's thoughts, that he holds so dear.

And the closeness of a women' s body heat, that man also hold so near.

Women is the irresistible fantasy that occupies man's mind

She's the essence of love and kindness that's hard to find.

Women is man's life time best friend

To stick by man and work with him to the end.

The essence of women is childish, oftentimes demanding and and incomplete.

But the love,and care of her man makes her complete.

What women want from her man, is ever so simple and plain

She competes for his ardent affections forever and again.

women is the essence of me and of you

a long time wish and beautiful dream come true.

Benny Faye Douglass



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      Edwyne Rouchelle 7 years ago

      Hi! Loved this piece. You do have the talent for writing poetry. Hope you'll enjoy your Thanksgiving holiday and travels. ttyl

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      benny Faye Douglass 7 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona

      Thank you love my yokies, for your comment and support. Blessings to you. creativeone59

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      love my yorkies 7 years ago from way out west

      Great poem. "She's the essence of love and kindness that's hard to find". So true, my dear.

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      benny Faye Douglass 7 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona

      They are the best gift to man, if they will only appreciate them. Thank you for your comment and feedback. blessing to you my dear. creativeone59

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      Barbara Eisenberg 7 years ago from Titusville

      Wonderful! A woman is a special gift to men.

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      benny Faye Douglass 7 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona

      Thank you Larry for such a way with words. thanks for your comment and feedback. I appreciate you. Godspeed. creativeone59

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      benny Faye Douglass 7 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona

      Thanks again esllr, for your very appreciated comment and feedback. blessings to you. creativeone59

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      maven101 7 years ago from Northern Arizona

      " Women is the air that man breathe "...Indeed..!

      Touching poetry beautifully constructed..Thank you, Larry

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      esllr 7 years ago

      Won-der-ful! I really enjoyed this. God Bless!

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      benny Faye Douglass 7 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona

      Thank you Sarra Garrett, thank you for your comment and your feedback. creativeone59

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      Sarra Garrett 7 years ago

      Very lovely

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      benny Faye Douglass 7 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona

      Thank you so much ek ellis, I appreciate your comment and feedback. Godspeed. creativeone59

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      ek ellis 7 years ago

      Where would man be without his woman, love your poem :)

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      benny Faye Douglass 7 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona

      Thank you poetlorraine, for your comment and feedback. Godspeed. creatived

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      benny Faye Douglass 7 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona

      Thank you for your comment, feedback and support. Godspeed. creativeone59

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      enjoed that

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      benny Faye Douglass 7 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona

      Thank you Hello hello for your comment and feedback. creativeone59

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      Veronica Allen 7 years ago from Georgia

      This beautiful, you've done it again Creativeone59!

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      Hello, hello, 7 years ago from London, UK

      A lovely hub, thank you.

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