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The Final Terminus

Updated on February 28, 2013

Huge tide… clapped

Announcing the final terminus…

Sweet ripping sensation

Exploded like the twelve fountains from a solitary rock

When luggage heaved into sight

On a carousal moving…

Nothing lost ,nothing gained

Together back home again

From an other cloud nine success,

Safe and sound.



For a moment

They looked at each other,

With the same glowing eyes

and then smiled

Relief found

Indeed

After a long night scroll.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Interesting perspective from the view of luggage.

      Voted up and interesting.

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      TDM 4 years ago from Welcome to my beautiful world, where magic is no longer a myth.

      very interesting.

      I voted up

      I. White

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      very clever and well done. Thank you.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Faith Reaper,Thanks so much for visit.I really appreciate that.

      Many Blessings to you

      James

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      hey james .. I like this .. very clever and different but contains underlying themes of love and relief within.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Isaac White.Thanks so much for the visit.

      Have a wonderful day

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      TDM 4 years ago from Welcome to my beautiful world, where magic is no longer a myth.

      no prob man. great read

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Mhatter99 .Thanks so much for being interested in all what I publish here.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @cleaner3.Thanks so much my friend for the visit and the encouragement.

      Have wonderful day wherever you are.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @Isaac White.Thanks so much once again for the reply.Would you mind me asking you where is that place where magic no longer a myth?:)

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Oh goodness me you have said so much here, like a tiny perfect 'novel' moment and you Sir James are truly a master of the written word and this was a 'wonder' to read and behold.

      Sending you warm wishes and good energy from Colin's cool jazz cafe and a nice cuppa of tea, don't worry, wine later. lol

      lake erie time canada 8:09pm

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