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The Finality

Updated on February 3, 2014
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Choreographed by the breath of a gentle wind,

A silent melody,

Starring the sun, clouds, faded colors.

Featuring the heart of a hopeless romantic

In the wake of the ultimate power

Of the seemingly silent soul.

There will be no curtain call

For this unfinished requiem.

Beguiled.

© 2014 Deb Hirt

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thanks, Hollie!

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      HollieT 3 years ago from Manchester, United Kingdom

      Beautiful, aviannovice!

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Yes, Anna, I do, and there are only special times when the mood strikes.

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      Anna Haven 3 years ago from Scotland

      Beautiful words with meaning. You write poetry from the very soul.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Glad you liked it, girishpuri.

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      Girish puri 3 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Amazing photo and poem..God bless.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thanks, Cindy. I do poetry upon occasion, but it must be profound poetry. Glad you noticed!

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      Cynthia Sageleaf 3 years ago from Western NC

      Love this. It's a departure from your other work and absolutely beautiful. HUGS

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thanks, deergha. Speaking of intertwining, you know exactly what I mean.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      And you know it, Nellieanna...

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Wowww such a beauty as the nature itself in the pic you have so aptly put in there, my dearest friend !!!! A hopeless romantic to look for love in deep down everywhere...even in the seemingly beautiful sky to get lost as in the eyes of the lover and there you touched the very base of every soul with this wonderful Poem here, Deb. Hats off dear...loved every bit of this one. Shared and votes way up.

      God bless you:-)

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      Nellieanna Hay 3 years ago from TEXAS

      ". . . the ultimate power. . . of the seemingly silent soul . . . " - says it.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thank YOU, Phyllis, for saying so.

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Such a lovely poem and photo. Thanks, Deb.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Glad that you liked it, Eddy. Today it spits snow...

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      So beautiful Deb, voted up ,shared and saved.

      Lots of love to you from Wales my dear friend.

      Eddy.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      ChitrangadaSharan, thanks so much for noticing…we must all do our part for what we now have, so let's hope that success will be forthcoming.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Perspycacious, loons are remarkable birds. As you know, they carry chicks on their backs, and it is so sad that they lost one. There is no mistaking that haunting call, is there?

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      Chitrangada Sharan 3 years ago from New Delhi, India

      Such a beautiful description of 'Nature'! A keen observer of Nature only can portray it so effectively in few words.

      Thanks!

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      Demas W Jasper 3 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Nice to be invited to join another read of Deb's.

      I had an experience with two loons in Nobleboro, Maine. I had fished at "Duck Puddle" there the day before and had seen loons with a loon chick. The next day the adult loons were there with no chick in sight. I made a loon call with my voice and they came and flapped enough to raise themselves up and look inside my boat. Perhaps they were looking for their chick, although that doesn't account for their responding to my sounding like a loon. When I moved the boat toward them, they dove and left streams of air bubbles showing where they were going. I followed several times and they were shocked to find on surfacing that I was still right there too!

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thanks, cygnet.

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      Donna Brown 3 years ago from Alton, Missouri

      What a beautiful description of a sunset, but it is not the end, just the turning of a page.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      As you know, it is a rare thing for me, so I have to make it somewhat striking. Thanks, Billy, for all your support.

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      And a lovely treat for us all as this day comes to an end. Beautiful work, Deb!

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