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The First Love

Updated on December 18, 2012
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The First Love

By Tony DeLorger © 2011


A furtive glance,

a warming grin,

our eyes do meet,

the spell begins.


The softest word,

our hearts imbued,

an innocent touch,

and love ensues.


Of wonder makes,

our searching minds,

discovery takes,

each soul sublime.


With eyes like pools,

we see right through,

into the depths,

our secrets true.


With knowledge thin,

our lives begin,

on slender rope,

where love has been.


With world gone by,

just we reside,

together now,

until time resign.


There is none like the first.


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      Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks d.william. Yes, wouldn't that be a wonderful thing, to hold that love for a lifetime.

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      d.william 5 years ago from Somewhere in the south

      Nice poem. Nice sentiment and so true. You never forget your first love, but if you are really lucky that first one will last for a lifetime. Although, they rarely do. Good job.

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      Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      So glad it brought all the memories back, Duchess. Thanks for reading and commenting. There is always a part of us that remains untainted, and naive; the purity of youth and emotions a treasured memory.

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      DuchessDuCaffeine 5 years ago from United States of America

      That was the dreamiest! Thanks, Tony. It reminded me of my first real boyfriend...sigh. It was summer every day :)

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      Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Glad you enjoyed it Smalltowngirl1372. Thanks for reading.

      And thanks for reading and commenting Leni.

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      Leni Sands 5 years ago from UK

      ditto - voted up beautiful & awesome

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      Smalltowngrl1375 5 years ago from Lafayette, Indiana

      Ah, nothing like that feeling. & the first love always holds a special place in your heart no matter how it ended.

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      Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Glad you appreciated it prashant angiras. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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      Prashant angiras 5 years ago from shimla(india)

      very true first love is first love,i liked your intelligent usage of words,that describe those moment..

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      Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks Happyboomernurse, thanks for the votes. Glad you connected.

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      Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks Aisham glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting.

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      Gail Sobotkin 5 years ago from South Carolina

      Wonderful ode to First Love. Voted up, awesome and beautiful.

      Congratulations on tying for the Poetry Hubbie Award.

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      The Gift of Pen 5 years ago from UK

      That was great! Wonderful vocabulary :) you really managed to capture the experience. Ah, poetry :D

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