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The Flower Watchers

Updated on June 7, 2013


A tender flower grows somewhere in the world ...

each day..she streches toward the Sun..

bringing a smile to all..who happen to look upon her

with Faith...of another tommorow

of your soft tenderness


They are in awe of your Beauty and marvel

at the creation of the Lord...

Grow my sweet flower..for you are Special..


Someday... one will pluck you...

because he... will want you for his own ..

and will then deprive the world

of what the Lord has given us ..


You will find your way... in the world ..

and understand that your life is special

and we the flower watchers... will not notice

because we will have moved on

to the next flower..


All but me .. my flower ..

for you will always be in my heart ..

and the memories of what

we experienced will never be another's..

but a special moment known.... only between us

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dim ..thank you for the kind words you give me..Dim.

      i am happy to see your latest work (which was awesome )..of course .. inspire me to write... also.!

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      This is so special. Awesome.

      The images also were fantastic.

      Thank you for sharing such a personal poem.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Jackie .. thank you .. your words are inspiring ..

      @Eddy .. your last hub was so creative with the collage ..it was superb.. thank you for the comment .. your visits are looked forward to ..

      @Blosson , thank you blossom.. I admire your work also .. to have all these women creative writers give me praise is humbling..

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      So beautifully gentle and delicate. Love it.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      All but me .. my flower ..

      for you will always be in my heart ..

      and the memories of what

      we experienced will never be another's..

      but a special moment known.... only between us

      Truly beautiful Michael.

      Voting up and sharing onto my FB page 'A Brand new dawn'.

      Eddy.

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Flowers and love, always top on my list and your poetry that cannot be beaten.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Aw, thank you so much, dearest Michael, I am humbled by your sweet words and kindness.

      You're the best!

      Hugs and love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      whonunuwho..thank you for the visit and the comment ..

      glad you like my poetry.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Faith .. You are the one ..

      another special creation of God .

      Thank you .. the understanding of what a poets words mean and how purity and love are one ..embedded together... forever in a few women are special. again thanks Faith .

      Michael

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Haseena.. thank you for the kind comment

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      Nice metaphorical form and well done my friend. whonu

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Hi Michael,

      Oh, how very special and lovely is this poem! I love how you related your special one to that of a soft and sweet flower, how sweet.

      Very lovely and delicate write.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      (will return to share, my sharing buttons are not appearing at the moment)

      Hugs and love, Faith Reaper

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      Haseena 4 years ago from India

      hey...great..voted up and awesome...