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The Greatest Heroic

Updated on September 13, 2011

I was snatched away from your arm…by a stranger…a kidnapper…
You came to save my life anyway…even if you strangle along the way…
You held my arm and never let go…I scream for you as tears run my eyes…
You fought that man and punch him with all your mighty soul
He left me fall broken…and tangled

Few bruise was on your face…but that was nothing to you…
You held me in your arm and screaming for help
While my leg was twisted and blood drools

A stranger...a driver…he stopped to helped out…
English was lost not found…I lost consciousness and
I only remember you cried out daughter…and siren run the street

I woke up in the hospital with my ankle attached to a metal
My leg was cast, I cannot walk…
The wheel chair became my feet…I was living through difficulty
But you were always there for me…

You held me and teach me…to walk on my feet…
Be strong in every move…I stumble to the ground
But you hold me tight in your arm and won’t let me fall…
You help me until I can walk again…that the greatest heroic love of all…


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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Dinesh and Nasser, thank you both so much! @Dinesh, I will take a look at it! :) thanks

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      nasseralabdali 6 years ago from Saudi Arabia

      Hi Chanroth...this poetic tale is emotional and built up powerfully. It has touched my heart, and brings me to know that a true love is the one stands by you in your bad needs. your fan, Nasser!

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      VENZKHVAM 6 years ago from Milk way galaxy, trying to find a more adventurous place in another galaxy with my great followers

      Hi Chanroth,

      An element of help is always there as long as you wish to attmept at possible way to fight. As usual very nicely crafted poem. I am waiting for my friend Chanroth to publish this book of poems.

      I had voted up and interesting.

      I had changed the lower part of my first poem hop you will take a look ot give your comments I had tried to rhyme it like the top also .

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi nisa, thanks!

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      nisa 6 years ago

      Wow! This is powerful!

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi ruff and x2x3 thanks! :0)

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      x2x3 6 years ago

      Beautiful sync !!

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      ruffridyer 6 years ago from Dayton, ohio

      Wow, a powerfull tale.