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The High Point Of My Day

Updated on July 11, 2013

Letting My Emotions Fly

When you look at each other and your eyes lock

What could you be thinking ?

Both our eyes wide open without blinking

I am feelng motivated and my creative juices our flowing

She just watched a funny sitcom and is still is laughing

The weather outside is dreary

Our cat is a little weary

Going down for a nap as her body just drops

We both have to work later

So we have two hours to kill

I rub my wifes back and she reminds me that feels so good

She scratches my head as I quiver with delight

We all have needs if we think about it or not

A comfort that can not be bought

I am looking for a special word that captures the feeling

One that covers the actions we pursue to satisfy all desires

Coming so close nose to nose

Giving in to a shyness and letting all our insecurities go

Taking enormous pride in the people we have become

Watching each others moves as if they were practiced for the first time

Closing the door behind us

Letting our passions be our guide

Off to have a little whoa-yah

As each smile intensifies even more

You can hear the sweet sounds that vibrate the hallway floor

One special time that has no personal gain

Leaving only incredible thoughts of making someone else so happy

Everyone should find the time

To stop what they are doing and say yes to something else

Even if whoa- yah isn't a word yet

It should be

It would mean stop and then say yes

Going slow and stopping for no apparent reason

Then you know it wouldn't be long

Before one of us would be saying

Yes I want more

Ever so slowly

All our good feelings uncovered a little at a time

Remembering everything in life doesn't always need to make sense or rhyme


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      DREAM ON 14 months ago

      Shanmarie Woth so many crazy things that throw our life in a tizzy. It's hard to walk when we are dizzy. Little signs of love add up to years of good memories and wonderful times. Thank you for reading and sharing.

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      shanmarie 14 months ago

      Whoa-yeah. I like that word. LOL

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      GypsyRose Lee To live a life full of joy and increased satisfaction can be a way of life.If we so desire.Thanx for reading and helping my writing become better.To many more exciting thoughts that connect us to the world we love so much.Have a great day.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. You are so right and that's just the way I love to live when nothing has to make sense or any rhyme or reason. Makes life more pleasurable that way.

      P.S. Change know - Going slow and stopping for know apparent reason - to no.

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      DDE Seeing the other person with a smile so wide.Making another day a good day.Gives life more focus.Thanx for reading and sharing.Wishing you a world of happiness.Minnetonka Twin I try to wear my Sundays best and think good thoughts and uncover more so I can reach far beyond the stars.So wonderful to see you and your comments are much appreciated.May your night be filled with surprises and love.

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      Linda Rogers 4 years ago from Minnesota

      Great poem my friend. I'm all about letting emotions fly. Liked how you walked us through the pieces of your day.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      However one chooses to be happy with each or about each other is sometimes without an explanation