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The Homicide Division

Updated on March 29, 2015


The Homicide Division

clocked in five fresh murders,

only one was a slam dunk,

the others got locked away

in a cold-case file trunk,

not sure how long they’ll stay,

it was a convenient store,

the fifty-two year old man from India

was stretched out on the floor,

his first look into death wasn’t brushed,

his skull had been crushed

in an argument with a younger man,

a petty thief who used a tire iron

to demonstrate the law of physics

that allow no two objects

to occupy the same space,

at the same time,

it was a down right disgrace,

as we can easily kill an innocent man

even after looking into his face,

they caught the young man quick,

one out of five,

and this was a good pick,

justice had indeed arrived,

and liberty was on the attack,

the Homicide Division,

were smiling and laughing,

and slapping each other on the back,

and what’s more,

all this was going on

while there was a dead man on the floor.

© 2012 Frank Atanacio

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      thank you so much Lisa

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      Lisa VanVorst 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Such an in-depth look into the reality of crime today and the behavior of those who experience it. Great hub.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Jodah for visiting my Homicide Division

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Great stuff Frank, a combination of your crime fiction stories and poetry. I thought it was a new hub, but see it's been around awhile. Voted up anyway. I enjoyed it.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Tom for reading and being left with an after thought

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Sujaya

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      so sad frnk

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      Tom Schumacher 3 years ago from Huntington Beach, CA

      I enjoyed your poem. However, it did leave me pondering how the families of the victim are affected when exposed to the reality of what it means to work a homicide? Sobering? Heartfelt? Anger? Resentment?

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      I agree bobcat lol

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      Bobcat 4 years ago

      that division of cops need retraining frankatanasoi

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Hey thanks X-man and you too hhunter :) happy new year to you folks :)

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      hhunterr 4 years ago from Highway 24

      The style and the reality of subject matter really mesh.

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      Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Another interesting and hard hitting hub, Frank!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      anyhow Raci thanks for reading :) Frank

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      OMG...what a gruesome way to die...speechless...

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      thanks again sueswan for reading my homicide division

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Frank

      The homicide division celebrated a little too soon.

      Voted up and awesome

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      im glad no one was hurt.. and you're right so many of you guys write beautifully and really spread good happiness.. and I tried it but find it so difficult .. so I just read what I can't do Bless you Eddy :) Frank

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Oh yes Frank another powerful and great hub from you my friend.

      I enjoy each and everyone and reading ones that are a little gloomy or nasty I don't mind at all because your hubs are so interesting and they also inspire me along my way.

      It would be nice to talk about sunshine and flowers all the time but sadly life isn't like this.!!!

      This hub brought a memory back of what happened right here only about 25 miles away;a teenager set fire to an ASDA superstore with nearly a hundred shoppers in there.

      Thank fully no-one was hurt and the youth arrested.

      An up up and away here.

      Take care my friend and have a great weekend.

      Eddy.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      no Phoebe.. not at all.. hmmmm

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      Phoebe Pike 5 years ago

      You write very passionately, but in this hub it seems like it is more like a dream than your actual writing. As if you were dreaming these things as you wrote.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      writer20 sending lots of love your way :) Frank Ruch sending lots of humor your way LOL Alastar thanks for reading and visiting the Homicide Division :)

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      Alastar Packer 5 years ago from North Carolina

      I've always felt a bit sad for some convenience store workers. High risk job for few rewards. You've captured the worst results of that job perfectly Frank.

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      Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

      Frank...do you watch CSI a lot? lol

      friend...pls bring some humor back...I start getting creeps reading your vivid descriptions :)

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Frank, lots of hugs to you writing another great poem love it. Voted up, well up up up. I wish there other buttons to click on, Joyce

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      yeah Im sorry about that VG but thanks for reading my stuff :) and Poetvix if you didn't rock you'd be rocking now!!!!

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      poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      It's like a real life look into a cop shop. I think maybe they have to laugh while such horror abounds to keep their sanity. This is another for the show you should get! It would be great. Crime dramas are all the rage now and I like how yours go to different places and view things from different angles all the time. Kudos!

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      The dark imagery makes me terribly sad. But this poem also reminds me you are the only one on hubpages who write unique poems. When lots of people write about love and life, you write about death and decadence.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      thanks so much the lytricwriter:) and Sky you would point out the law of physics LOL thanks for stopping by :)

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      There you go again , and in your was of exposing the ugly face of Evil. And of course all this would happen with a body on the floor , because , it's on the job .

      And don't start and argument for the dead, keep up the one for those that exist and need to face the reality of who 's next.

      As it's appointed onto man once to die but after death!

      Keep up the great work , you are already a specalist at your craft.

      This is great.

      to demonstrate the law of physics

      that allow no two objects

      to occupy the same space,

      at the same time,

      Bless.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Voted up, awesome, and interesting Frank. It is a cruel world my friend and you capture it in poetry. Another great poem Frank. Death is among us all.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Our Ms Brooks Just gotta keep loving you,, bless you my friend :) Frank

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh Frank everyone is laughing while there is a dead man on the floor.. they sound so heartless. I love your poems. they are so real and full of life and death.

      Bless you today'

      Voted up my friend

      Debbie