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The Love Letter Written

Updated on May 22, 2013

The Love Letter


Her pen hit the paper with a little motion,

as she started the love letter

and she sprinkled in a ripple of emotion,

she stared briefly at the ceiling,

and then she wrote about the loss of feelings,

that were never really gone,

and she continued writing on and on,

simple words at times,

but powerful, and very strong,

she didn’t care,

giving her words a suspicious stare

from fawn colored eyes,

her words were caressed,

somewhat pampered,

deeply impressed,

when she read it,

the soft words became cries,

filled with truth,

hidden in a web of lies,

at first she was a little rusty,

some of the words used

were old and slightly dusty,

but she wrote it reflectively,

and she filled it with fear,

keeping the truth near,

immediately after she wrote it,

she collapsed into the nearest chair,

and lay back looking as if she were dead,

everything she wanted to say was said,

the ink rolled out wet and red,

it only took a few minutes then it dried,

the words would be prettier and had wings,

as her written thought stings,

sensitive but had the strength to persuade,

as the topic of love played,

like an impressive parade.


© 2011 Frank Atanacio

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    • Frank Atanacio profile imageAUTHOR

      Frank Atanacio 

      4 years ago from Shelton

      thank Justasksusan and lucky you Lady enjoy your long w/e bless you both :)

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      Joanna Chandler 

      5 years ago from On planet Earth

      Very lovely frank :)

      Have a wonderful weekend mines have started have two holidays back to back , lucky me.

    • Just Ask Susan profile image

      Susan Zutautas 

      5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Very nice!

    • Frank Atanacio profile imageAUTHOR

      Frank Atanacio 

      5 years ago from Shelton

      thank you justateacher

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      LaDena Campbell 

      5 years ago from Somewhere Over The Rainbow - Near Oz...

      Nice...love the emotion!

    • Frank Atanacio profile imageAUTHOR

      Frank Atanacio 

      5 years ago from Shelton

      Thank you so much for reading my love letter Debby Bruck and thank you too Moms secret :)

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      Lissette 

      6 years ago from Central Florida

      I love when your thoughts get typed out!

    • Debby Bruck profile image

      Debby Bruck 

      6 years ago

      Lovely, Frank. I felt this entire poem in slow-motion, every gesture, every feeling, every thought. Blessings, Debby

    • Frank Atanacio profile imageAUTHOR

      Frank Atanacio 

      6 years ago from Shelton

      thanks so kindly shim..:) I think

    • shimmering Dawn profile image

      shimmering Dawn 

      6 years ago

      The process of writing this letter is very beautifully explained from the emotional angle of a woman. You are a sensitive man Frank. Great writing this. Have a blessed day! Shalom!

    • Frank Atanacio profile imageAUTHOR

      Frank Atanacio 

      6 years ago from Shelton

      thanks lisa Marie

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      Lisa Stover 

      7 years ago from Pittsburgh PA

      at first she was a little rusty,

      some of the words used

      were old and slightly dusty

      ~Beautiful choice of words~

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