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The Lovers

Updated on March 26, 2013
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.


We were together from the beginning

We died together in the end

We are mist

Transparent and grey

Life took us

Made us take a stand

Now we watch

From a place

Nobody knows

We as lovers

Only we can see

We will walk across Europe

And Asia

Across the land

And the sea




And Italy

The beast cannot tame

Our beauty

Lying within us

Nobody can relinquish our love

We watch life moving all around us

Helping lost souls

In the end

We will walk together

Hand in hand

Just us two left alone

Just as we died together

Kindred spirits

Spread across all foreign land


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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Thank you Lanzskie. :)

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      Roland Adala 5 years ago from Wales, United Kingdom

      Beautifully crafted poem indeed!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Hi Vinaya thank you!

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      The poetic narration is wonderful. Yes truly, love is beyond time and space.

      I just loved it.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Thank you Billy. That is a great compliment. :)

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      This is beautiful Caroline! You are a talented writer for sure and I'll be back to visit whenever I need a little beauty in my day.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      @ Hi Debbie thank you for stopping by. Glad you liked it.

      @ Hi Hubert thank you for your kind words!

      @ Hi Cyndi thanks a lot!

      @ Hi Wayne thank you for your vote and kind words!

      @ Hi Michael thank you for the kind words. What a great compliment!

      @ Hi Ruby thank you very much kind lady.

      @ Lady E thanks for reading!

      @ Curiad thank you!

      @ Mckbirdks thank you for taking time out to read and comment!

      @ Blaise thank you for reading!

      @ Gypsy thank you very much for your kind words.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Reminded me of that song Endless Love.

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      What a beautiful poem. Two souls knotted wherever they may be..

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      mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Timeless love, and an unending journey, what a combination.

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      Mark G Weller 5 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Love for an eternity, I like it!

      Thank you and voted up!

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      Elena 5 years ago from London, UK

      Beautifully written - Thanks.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful journey through life and death..Loved it Caroline...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline. yes.... You have been saving this one I know for it is to good to be put out here. it's just like putting your heart out there for the first time, so nice so moving so deep.

      Very nice Caroline.

      Love ya,


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      Wayne Brown 5 years ago from Texas

      A very moving after death...the bonds continue to exist and are even stronger. Thanks much for sharing. Voted UP! WB

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      Cynthia B Turner 5 years ago from Georgia

      Hi Caroline, Awesome poetry!

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      Hubert Williams 5 years ago

      Caroline that was beautiful. That picture is also awesome great choice. Up beautiful interesting, awesome. Righteous, Dudette.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Caroline so awesome my friend.. Love your poem I like how you took us through all the land.. a world tour.

      voted up and sharing