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The Magic Illusion

Updated on March 3, 2011
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I had a magical dream one night
a mystical dream of illusion...
a glimmer of faint possibilities
I feared was but mere allusion.

I fell in love with a dream that night
whose whisper of sweetest devotion
embraced my heart with possibilities,
unleashing great tides of emotion.

Can you fall in love with a dream one night
or is it simply magic illusion
where the promise of love's possibilities
is such powerful spirit infusion?

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      ahorseback 6 years ago

      Very nice poem !! I believe you can!

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      Denizee 6 years ago

      Beautiful and thought provoking! Awesome rhyme and meter - it flows down the page and captures I readers attention.

      Very good poem - I may be a hopeless romantic but I believe as well - love and magic do exist in reality, just as portrayed in movies. Great Hub!

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      ahorseback, thank you and I hope you're right!

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      Denizee,Thank you so much! I am a believer now, only because I have been touched by such magic...still not too sure its real, but the effect it has had is real...I thank heaven above for that...illusion or not!

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      .....well there is no illusion here because I always fall in love with your poetic dreams .......

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      Sometimes the verse that flows from my heart feels like magic, sometimes it feel like the ramblings of a silly old fool. I kind of swing back and forth like a pendulum on that. You make them feel like magic, with your sweet comments, and I feel like a real poet. That's a Huge gift, in my world. I guess a silly old fool can write magically...Thank you just doesn't do it!

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      michael ely 6 years ago from Scotland

      Hi tnderhrt23, Really great poem. I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks. Michael.

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      miss_jkim 6 years ago

      This has a fresh and crisp feel to it, while wrapping me in warmth and comfort.

      Nice poem!

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      michael, I am so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment!

      miss_jkim, that is a really lovely comment! Thank you, kindly!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Lovely is inadequate.Loved it!!

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      always exploring, thank you, thank you, thank you! I am thrilled!

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      Marina Lester 6 years ago

      Dreams... I fill my world with them, because I fell in love, so yes, you certainly can. Thanks for the read! Keep your magical dream, keep it dear. :)

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