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The Magic Well

Updated on March 4, 2011

Seldom am I speechless
though at times, I may not speak.
My thoughts whirl frantically inside,
regardless, yet, not weak.

Rarely at a loss for words,
I choose my comments well...
For it is my sincere desire
sweet truth of heart to spell.

Upon occasion, happens
proper words I cannot find...
where word cannot do justice to
the whirling of my mind.

it does not happen often...
to thus be rendered mute...
my heart most oft is ready
to respond in quick pursuit.

But then one day I stumbled
Upon a deep, deep well.
a well that flowed with magic
and into it I, then, fell.

the magic was inviting
and quick to overwhelm...
its taste and fragrance heady,
carried me to unknown realm...

Now, here I sit in wonder
for the words I seek to find
flee as chased by fire in
my ever whirling mind.

Yes, seldom am I speechless
though at present can not speak...
my thoughts are whirling frantically,
as magic words I seek.

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      Fluffy, I am so happy that you can relate! I appreciate your visits to my humble hubs and your awesome comments which are such inspiration!

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      Fluffy77 6 years ago from Enterprise, OR

      Very lovely, and full of deep passionate expression of emotions here. I can relate to the words of yours here, written well.

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      Spirit Whisperer, it feels remote, like a distant memory, indeed! Thank you!

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      Xavier Nathan 6 years ago from Isle of Man

      I wonder now if you still ever feel this same anxious feeling or if it is now a distant memory of a redundant I that fell that day into the abyss! Brilliant expression of feeling as ever.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      enjoyed immensely. You have the gift.


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      Marina Lester 7 years ago

      Great stuff! :D Very fun rhythm and wonderful, no, magical words. Niiice. Completely loved it!

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      Beautifully magical, I so enjoyed this.

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      Warren Keith Hayes 7 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      The well if full of magic that sparkles brilliantly, within your words. Thank you for sharing this.

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      De-lovely 7 years ago

      Oh, how beautifully written poem ! I loved it.. It was magic.

      Thanks for sharing!

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      Erica Sanchez 7 years ago from California

      This was great!!! I felt the magic myself in this poem!!

      Voted up, useful, awesome, beautiful!!

      Smiles :)