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The Moon wishes

Updated on May 14, 2013


The hurt of your words

they cut sharper... than a knife

why .. why can't we be.... together


The stars have the sky ..

the birds have the tree's

the rivers have the oceans..


Although you are there..

and I am here

we can still touch ....

each other's souls

each heart will beat as one ..

days and nights pass ..

but we still hurt


The Moon wishes....

to meet the Sun

each..... on their own side of the world

longing to have .....

what can never be

why .. why ..why..

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    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Eric..

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      Eric Dierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      I sure like it. Thank you.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Ken...

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      Kenneth C Agudo 4 years ago from Tiwi, Philippines

      Nice poem ;-)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank You ..Eddi

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      The Moon wishes....

      to meet the Sun

      each..... on their own side of the world

      longing to have .....

      what can never be

      why .. why ..why..

      Beauitufl words as always Michael.

      Eddy.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Ed.. opposites attract they say ..

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      It does seem all that way at times Micheal, Opposites like two poles of the magnetic field !......awesome ......Ed

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you... CloudExplorer.. sometimes a spark starts a fire that becomes a unstoppable .. i commend you for your effort.

      again thank you for the kind words.!

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      Wow this poem radiates unity and hope of us all becoming one voice someday, one connection, one entity. "Truly united"

      I feel you on this, and began an online campaign a little while back known as "Our Voices" and to do just what you are speaking on here with this very poem. "Greed is the reason why" of course then there's, loads more negative reasons.

      Jealousy is another and envy is yup another. What a shame right!

      Thanks for taking the time to scribe a powerfully thought provoking poem, that literally spells true love.

      Nice poetic release cleaner3 :) thumbs up high and sharing!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Wayne ..thank you

      @Tillsontitan.. thank you for the comment .. very nice quote... but i am flattered to be compared in his company.

      @thank you James .. keep writing those great thoughtful poems ..

      @Faith Reaper .. you always say the right thing.!

      @Vix .. you have been with me from the start and i truly appreciate your comments .. my loyal friend

      @Jackie .. thank you for the comment and the visit!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Theatre Girl.. thank you for the comment.. and the visit

      @Joe my hawaiian friend .. I have met many people writing poetry and some are very special to me ..

      @ thank You Jamie.. You have made me smile knowing that i have brought a good memory to your heart.

      @Doc... thank you for the comment and the visit ..!

      @ deborah ..thank you for the comment ..and the share ..

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Isn't that just the way of it? Like day and night. Love really can turn our world upside down. You said it well.

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      poetvix 4 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      Such a sadly beautiful poem, powerful and full of emotion. Most impressively done, most impressive indeed.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      When the heart wants what the heart wants, but it is sad when it does not go both ways no doubt!

      Very heartfelt piece. Voted up and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Wow. This is exquisitely sad...perfect, absolutely brilliant.I once felt like this...nice job

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      This is actually majestic. "Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words." Robert Frost....you my friend have found the words!

      Voted up and beautiful.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Tugs at the heart. Beautiful!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh My dear.. so awesome and beautiful but so very sad... many blessings.. you have me crying

      Debbie

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      Beautiful yet sad. very creative and well-done. the images are awesome. I also like the title. voted up++ thank you for your fan mail. Doc

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Your poem has brought back to me all the memories of love that never was, your poem captured this so well. Jamie

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      Hawaiian Odysseus 4 years ago from Southeast Washington state

      I think I'm missing something...is there a long distance romance going on between you and another Hubber? Or is all this make believe? Your writing sounds inspired and convincing, and that's why I think something real is going on. : ) Great job, my friend! Aloha!

      Joe

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      Heartbreakingly written....and I love the pictures!