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The Mountain That Called Forth Perseverance

Updated on July 22, 2010

The Mountain That Called Forth Perseverance

We could only feel the quake of this mountain in our heart as we stood in captivity in the house of our enemy.

It said you will

need perseverance

But he sent a savior to bring us out of this place that cause our body to ache and our soul to cry out

It said you will perseverance

In our coming out we could hear the rumble of this great mountain

It said you will need perseverance

Across hot sandy deserts and our soul thirsting

It said you will need perseverance

Now we can see it in view; reaching out still out of reach. Our suffering took on the meaning called purification

We heard perseverance

The thorny plant was our meat and our drink

We heard perseverance

We came to a rock to stand on to give us some height and to lay our head on at night

We heard perseverance

We awake to the sun light that peaked through the mountain

We heard perseverance

We touched the bottom of the great mountain thou tired and weary

We heard perseverance

We had made it to the mountain that we heard a far off in our captivity and through our journey

We heard perseverance

We climbed with all our might and believing hearing we need perseverance

Our hands and feet bruised from the climb our brow burnt from the heat of the sun

Our hearts heavily laden

We heard perseverance

We came to the top Humble and Broken a new found being on the top of Mt.ZOIN

THE GREAT CITY OF OUR GOD

Well done you had perseverance!

©2010-03-30 Sharon Smith

 

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Hello VAMPGYRL420 (Windy Grace), THANKS for your visit and graceful comment.

    God Bless!

    Sharon Smith

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    Windy Grace Mason 7 years ago from The Eastern Shore of Virginia, Maryland and Delaware, U.S.A.

    Beautiful Hub, SwiftlyClean! I look forward to reading more of your work :)

    Love & Light,

    Windy Grace

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Hello richardcrouch,I'm glad it was a blessing to you.

    Thanks for stopping by and the comment.

    God Bless You!

    Sharon Smith

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    richardcrouch 7 years ago from Hastings, England

    Thank you. Your message brought me great encouragement.

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Thank you Dream On it is truely a blessing to get your comment.

    God Bless you!

    Sharon Smith

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    DREAM ON 7 years ago

    I see the shining light with perseverance in sight.You help me along.Great hub.

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Thanks CaseyB35, for stoping in to read and leaving a comment.

    God Bless!

    Sharon Smith

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    CaseyB35 7 years ago

    As the others have said, very good write. I do agree with them. Do keep up the good work.

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Thanks Putz Ballard for visiting my hub.

    May God Bless you with a Tremendous Heart to push forward!

    Sharon Smith

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    Putz Ballard 7 years ago

    A tremendous hub

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Thanks Micky Dee I have my eye and heart on the mark.

    God Bless!

    Sharon Smith

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    Persevere SwiftlyClean! Persevere!

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Hello thevoice,Thanks for your visit and time.

    God Bless!

    Sharon Smith

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    thevoice 7 years ago from carthage ill

    good write thanks