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The Night Is Still Young

Updated on September 8, 2011

When Is The Right Time To Write

When my emotions take over

All my thoughts are raging the unknown war

They all talk to me sometimes all at once and that can be pretty scarey

I have to slow down and say to myself and sometimes out loud

One thought at a time please

I will listen to all your thoughts just you have to be patient and wait one minute

Who is first and that is a big problem

They all say I am

I have a great idea

I can say please take a number and a seat and I will be right with you

Now that we solved that problem who is first

Do I want to talk about the things that happened in my past

No not right now

There is so much ground to cover and so little time today

I don't like to start on an idea and not finish

I feel kind of deprived and let down

So I now narrow it down to what I want to do

Maybe talk about todays events

Nothing really exciting there either

How about a good story ?

Everyone loves a good story

Well with my creative thoughts starting to take shape

I think that would be nice

Well I can kick around a few ideas and see where it leads

At this point I try to blank out my mind and then let the thoughts come in one at a time

The thoughts form a line a mile long

I send the first five thoughts forward and then I tell the others they can go home

Tomorrow just bring your number with you and that will save you and me alot of time

We can cut the red tape and go right for the meat of it

Skip all the fat (it is no good for you anyway)that is what every doctor will say

Don't forget to listen to the doctor (the doctor knows best)

When the night rolls around so many people want to go out and party

Have a few drinks and have a night on the town

There is nothing wrong with that

But more often than not it ends up in a fight and someone getting hurt

Experience will tell all

Then again we all have to blow off steam and have a good time

I am getting old I guess

All I want to do is write about the wild night one that doesn't even exist yet

A yawn comes over me and I stretch my hands to the ceiling

When people go out they have a few drinks and talk to strangers they don't even know

I rather get a glass of water from the fridge and a bowl of ice ceam and say lets type away

See how I can pull on my heart strings and bring about change for the better

Well at least I have my hands ready and my eyes glued to my imagination

Holy smokes here goes nothing and I can only get better from here


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    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      7 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick Be careful I have seen some thoughts trying to cut in line.Now that isn't fair to all the other thoughts who waited their turn.Well what goes around comes around and around and around and around.Have pleasant dreams and wonderful thoughts tuck you in at night.Then you will get the best sleep ever.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      7 years ago from Great Britain

      Thanks for that..... You are so funny...

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      7 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick I can't wait to see all the faces of your thoughts while they wait.Some give you a look like why me.Others a look this will be the last time.You will see the thoughts wait and soon they will show you what they are made of.But most know passion and fun have just begun.

    • Dim Flaxenwick profile image

      Dim Flaxenwick 

      7 years ago from Great Britain

      Oh boy! what a gem you are.!

      I shall definately borrow your idea of giving a ticket to my thoughts and make them wait in line.......

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      7 years ago

      Movie Master You are in search of your dream and make it happen.Do everything you can to set each step you take a blaze.Like an ocean wave that roars.The sun that rises every day without notice quietly but filled with the greatest powers known to man.I will help you whenever I can.Never give up and you can walk across the burning hot sand with a water in your hand.Ready to tackle any problem with such finese and skill.They will make you smarter and you will activate all the powers of free will.Have a great day.

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      Movie Master 

      7 years ago from United Kingdom

      Hello dream on, I am sure you are talking about me!

      I can so relate to your words, I absolutely love this!!

      It's your best so far and I am voting everything Up!

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      7 years ago

      Heart4theword Just trying to keep an open mind and work on developing my ideas farther than I thought possible.Thanx for understanding and joining in so we can all have more fun.

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      7 years ago from hub

      Got a pretty awesome word picture from your wording of thoughts a mile long:) Thanks for the read!


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