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The One I Lost

Updated on September 3, 2010

This poem is for a special girl who I'm sure would rather not be named but she knows who she is.

In the glowing embers of the fire, I feel your warmth.

The rain that falls gently on my skin is but only tears.

The tears that fall taint the memories we made

the ones that were meant to last forever

like us.

Together forever, drawn by a bond

so powerful and yet weak enough that it broke

when I told you it's over, that I couldn't anymore..

Regrets are but one of the many things I feel

when I talk to you.

I miss you and would take it all back in an instant.

So babe if you're reading this, I miss you.


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    • Micky Dee profile image

      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Nice thoughts.

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      Cathy Nerujen 7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Heart-meltingly wonderful, and very moving. Aaah, love. It is amazing.

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       7 years ago

      I love you baby..

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      st0rm3 7 years ago from Durban, South Africa

      luuuuccckkky girl

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      stars439 7 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

      Very nice and very lovely. God Bless You

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      Char-Ann 7 years ago from New Zealand

      This is a beautiful poem. Whoever the girl is, she's lucky to have someone like you.

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      noorin 7 years ago from Canada

      Awww, I luv it =) Lucky her =)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      You never lost her that is for sure.. :)

      This is so beautiful