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The Pain of Zayleen

Updated on September 7, 2012

I read your words .. Zayleen

so full of Pain

all thick and wet....

like a cold, cold rain

Your passion abounds ...

from feelings hurt

vicious.... statements

words used so curt

Love is deep....

buried..... somewhere in there

trying to look out

with a frozen stare

Your tortured soul

is crying out from the deep...

cold and broken...

there it weeps

Let it out...Zayleen.

remove the pain

Love will bloom.....

once more again

Turn the Passion

into a flame...

free your soul

Zayleen Pain


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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dotti, on my hubs .... what is happenning has this world gone mad..?

      thanks for the comments Dotti.

      Love Ya


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      D.Juris Stetser 5 years ago from South Dakota

      Wonderful poem Michael. She's a lucky girl having a friend like you, and I hope she finds healing and peace. You, my friend have such a warm heart and boundless are truly a poetic soul. love you....take care.


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      cleaner3 5 years ago

      I am glad that i can inspire you and more than happy that i bring a smile to that pretty face .the binding is strong my young poet, whenever you need me, drop me a line and i will try to inspire you.

      Keep writing .. Thanks for the compliment. I see you have also picked up a few new followers.


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      brittney 5 years ago from lost in my own minds lines

      I read this every day and brings a smile to my pained face. I think of you every time i sit alone trying to write and the words flow freely as i admire the kindness you have bestowed upon a perfect stranger . We are poetically binded from this point on in my mind. Thank you a million times over my friend .

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Caroline , thanks for the comments.

      @teaches , thank you for the kind words and for the visit.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      The pain is deep for Zayleen. It is hard to trust again once you have been so badly hurt. Those photos are dramatic but really make the point well.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Beautiful poem Michael! You amaze me with your depth. :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago

      Thanks for the visit k, and your kind comments. I think she will be alright .

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      i hope she is able to free her soul, Michael..i hope we all are..stunning photos!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Zayleen, I tried to express what you write. your words of pain and sorrow come from deep inside and that is the best poetry written when you make the reader feel your pain. you are a young and talented poet Zayleen. I am humbled by your praise. I can only give you the recognition for giving me the inspiration to write you a poem. Keep writing for the best is yet to come from you.


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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      How lucky is Zayleen to have a tribute poem from you Michael. It can be difficult to move on after love but after a beautiful poem like this, I bet it takes some of the edge off it. You are a true artist my friend.

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      brittney 5 years ago from lost in my own minds lines

      I dont know what to say cleaner! Amazing, spectacular, gorgeous, beautiful, soulful, thoughtful! Thank you so much for the poem i will cherish it always!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago

      girishpuri, thank you for the comments.

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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Very different and unique poem , interesting

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, wow, I did not realize you were speaking of an actual person. I will do so. Amazing. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @thank you Audrey, your kind words humble me

      @Faith Reaper, thank you for the visit and for the words of strong faith. She is young but has a talent for writing with passion. visit her hub and you will see this . God bless you .

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Profound write here! Some like to remain in that pain as that is all they know and actually where they feel most comfortable, but there is hope here for her to be set free, truly. Voted Way Up In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Wonderful plea toward unburdening oneself--beautiful hub all the way around!


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