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The Prime Imposters

Updated on February 17, 2014

The illusion of achievement

Imagery of gratification

Mischievous sentiment of pride

In the fellows consolation

Callous act of upliftment

And a fatal sense of bloom

Unseen future bereavement

Cloaked clouded doom




Camouflage of flying trajectory

Luring, the first imposter is victory



An idea of a fall

Searing seeping in the soul

Embarrassment among all

Smell of gloom is foul

Isolation of the mind

Desolation amid the blind

Broken hinges of destiny

Blunt knives of inner mutiny


A mist of invincible deceit

The second imposter is defeat

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      Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Rahul, my friend it is SO good to see you back! And you came back with a bang. I would expect nothing less, my friend.

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      Martie Coetser 3 years ago from South Africa

      Achievement and Defeat - a Siamese twin playing peek-a-boo with us all the time....

      Welcome back, Rahul :)

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      Shalini Sharan 3 years ago

      A great comeback my friend! keep the good work coming :)

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      Shalini Sharan 3 years ago

      A great comeback my friend! keep the good work coming! Cheers!

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      Jessee R 3 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hey Shauna... how have you been... I have missed you :)

      Thank you for remembering me

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      Jessee R 3 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hello Grannie Martie..... you always have that GrandMa's ways of saying the most deep and complex things in the most simple of ways

      Love you loads

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      Jessee R 3 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much Shalni.. I am glad you liked it...

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      Sueswan 3 years ago

      It is a not a illusion that you have not lost your talent for writing.

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      Jessee R 3 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Oh! Thank you very much Sue :)

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      Ruchira 3 years ago from United States

      wow...this was awesome!

      such a beautiful message, rahul

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      Jessee R 3 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much Ruchira

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      rahul, such a pleasure to see you back !! You were missed, it's good to see your poem is as powerful as ever. I hope all is well.

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      Jessee R 3 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      hello tobusiness.... I am glad you re visited my work... thank you for your kind words

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Incredible poetry, super message. Nice to see you here. Hope all is well.

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      Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      rahul....Goodness.....our beautiful & talented rahul is back. I've thought of you so often and wondered why I had not seen you about the Community. So pleased to see you back with us and hope that this time you stay.

      Your lovely Poetry is a perfect entrance.....always inspiring and moving, your work is amazing, rahul.....Up ++ shared, pinned & tweeted.

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      Jessee R 2 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks Rose............

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      Demas W Jasper 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      From a comment you made on courage, I searched your profile and read of your return. I guess we have both been productively busy in our callings. More power to you and keep the flow flowing!

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      Jessee R 12 months ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hey ... man... thanks for the apprciation and deep insight..... yeah..... the good part is that you realise that there is a calling

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