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The Problem With Running

Updated on March 16, 2011

A friend I met

trying to decide

to leave or stay

a path without guide

escaping life created

not by others

self berated

yet fixing nothing

not within or without

not changing jot or tittle

and wondering at a new view

forgetting nothing changed before

people are like that you know

wanting things

not answering for the cost

then in insanity 

trying again

the same way

the same path

chasing their own tale

wholly unsatisfied

condemned from within 

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    • Jaggedfrost profile imageAUTHOR

      Jaggedfrost 

      7 years ago

      lol hillrider, another nice complement.

    • hillrider profile image

      hillrider 

      7 years ago from Mid-west United States

      JFrost - another nice poem ...

    • Jaggedfrost profile imageAUTHOR

      Jaggedfrost 

      7 years ago

      I try, expression to me in any form seems pointless without a point being made. It is always nice to have such as yourself to share my observations with all the same.

    • acaetnna profile image

      acaetnna 

      7 years ago from Guildford

      You always have a message in your poetry and write with so much feeling. Great work.

    • Jaggedfrost profile imageAUTHOR

      Jaggedfrost 

      7 years ago

      ben I don't know you well enough, I would like to though. It is odd, but many of the things I have ruminated over here on my site seem to connect with many of your observations. The person was someone I am personally acquainted with but the syndrome is more common then that. If you find yourself in the lines as well I am sorry but it was unintended. No one is in that frame of mind permanently without choosing to be so.

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      BenWritings 

      7 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Ok, well I would hate for you to feel that way about me, by reading a few of my poems...that would be sad

      hmmm ok..

    • Jaggedfrost profile imageAUTHOR

      Jaggedfrost 

      7 years ago

      Believe it or not Ben, your poem reminded me of another lost soul with a totally different outlook on life. I decided to generalize this piece for effect, where you are at least analyzing the pieces this person just runs and shuns reason.

    • Jaggedfrost profile imageAUTHOR

      Jaggedfrost 

      7 years ago

      lol there are a lot of my works that I would read that way but where I am at I am not sure there is a suitable venue.

    • Sestenes profile image

      Sestenes 

      7 years ago from Iowa

      Very glum. I feel that this would be great to hear recited live.

    • BenWritings profile image

      BenWritings 

      7 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      I feel like this is related to your comment, and I'm really not sure how to take it.

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