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The Riddle of Me

Updated on March 3, 2011

I am unsure
about my deal.
Am i fantasy
or real?
An illusion,
a mirage
or am I but
an art collage?
Am I surreal
and do not know,
or am I just
reflective show?
Who I am,
I must confess...
is not clear.
I can only guess.
I have a sense
of the divine
in this misty
head of mine.
It is enough
today to be
who I find
myself to be.
I'm a mystery...
a riddle so sublime.


"Copyright 2011, All Rights Reserved."


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      No_Clue 5 years ago

      Ahhh, thank you, Max, that is quite a compliment, indeed! I am thrilled!

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Oh, my God. The style is amazing, so perfect and smooth flow! I love the expressions, it's so intriguing =)

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Thank you, Umna! I appreciate your visit and comment!

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      Umna Safdar 6 years ago

      I too have got some similar thoughts...liked the poem.. :)

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Docmo, I am quite happy, thank you, Sir!

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      Mohan Kumar 6 years ago from UK

      Very good- very mysterious and deep. Love it!

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Smiles...thanks Wayne! This one was a fun write!

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      Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas

      What a great signature piece for your writing moniker...No_Clue! I loved it. Nice work! WB

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Fossillady, I think Einstein was very right! I am just learning that we create who we are...I'm a late bloomer but...a bloomer, nonetheless! That in itself was a revelation! I love your comments! You are an awesome gal!

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      No_Clue 7 years ago

      justom, I am having some trouble with that, myself! Thanks! and Peace to you, as well!

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      justom 7 years ago from 41042

      Another good one, I can't keep up with you :-P Peace!! Tom

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      Kathi 7 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

      a life unexamined is not worth living, i think that's a quote from Einstein, anyway it fits! Looooved your poem!

      We create who we are!!!

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      No_Clue 7 years ago

      janbee, you are a good friend, indeed!

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      janbee 7 years ago are Very Real! A wonderful person with a Divine sense of self! Hugs to you,my friend!

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      No_Clue 7 years ago

      Elizabeth, thank you...I so appreciate your visit!

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      No_Clue 7 years ago

      Spirit Whisperer, Can anyone truly capture the essense of the color green and convey it is it truly is, in all its hues and tones, to a blind man? I can only try, right? Been told God loves a sure hope so!!! Thank you and you are welcome! Love and light!

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      Elizabeth99 7 years ago from Milwaukee, WI

      Very nice and mysterious. :)

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      Xavier Nathan 7 years ago from Isle of Man

      How do you explain the colour green to a blind man who has never seen the colour? I love the way you try in this poem.

      Thank you.

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      No_Clue 7 years ago

      Denise, thank you, thank you, and I will hop on over to your site and check out your work!

      epigramman, you are my poetic heart-throb! any poet's dream!

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      epigramman 7 years ago

      ..please lead me onto ...your promised poetic land - and there is no other alter ego here who rocks my world - as much as you!!!!!

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      Denise Handlon 7 years ago from North Carolina

      Yes to all of it and more. The mystery and the Divine. Beautiful. Glad I hopped and found you.

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      vietnamvet68 7 years ago from New York State

      I'm a mystery, a riddle so sublime. I like this.

      God Bless

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      No_Clue 7 years ago

      You are a gem, bbnix! Thank you!

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      bbnix 7 years ago from Southern California

      You are both real and sublime, it's the world that is surreal..

      It is such a pleasure to experience your poetry, and this one, since I'm a lifelong artist, paints a picture for me, especially...

      And from this misty headed person, as well, thank you my dear friend.

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      No_Clue 7 years ago

      So it is, WillStarr, so it is! Thanks for your loyalty and ever encouraging comments!

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      WillStarr 7 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      No_clue is apt for this one!

      I like it!