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The Spy From Neverland

Updated on August 10, 2012
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I read the hub of the unknown spy, who was celebrating her 100 th hub. I was inspired to write her a poem . Hope you like it Jaime. thanks for the inspiration.



To the Spy..... from Neverland

walk with me...in the sand

hold me close

let me hold your hand

You come from a place

I know not...

A lovely place of peace

that time has forgot

Such a beautiful soul

that comes from within

and a... wonderful heart

who ever meets you.....hopes to never part

You write with a certain softness

that no one ever can compare

the words drop... like shiny sprinkles

of clear water... there

where the pools.. they shine

like the rays of light

that come from the stars

in the darkest of night.


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      rdsparrowriter 5 years ago

      glad to hear :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank You sparrow .! your visits always bring a smile to my face !

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      rdsparrowriter 5 years ago

      Nice work Micheal :) Special words for a special person :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Jaime, you come back as many times as you want you beautiful, soft loving human being. everytime i read it I am amazed at myself how I described such a beautiful person with only words . I could not have done it without you. You own it now, for it is forever yours...

      Michael

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      An awesome title.....wonderful dedication.....subject is above everything...a celebration in truest of sense @ cleaner3. the hub from Unknown Spy reaching 100th nos of hub is really a very memorable read and yes.....it proves that hubpages is beyond all....a relationship is what matters even beyond life. Hats off to both "the Spy from neverland" and cleaner3 for this special hub.

      I pressed all possible buttons here and away ....:-)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      i really like this..i always visit this hub! shared

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you max. you are such a loyal friend and follower. thank you for all your lovely comments.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Sweet, genuine delight! What an astonishing tribute to a fellow Hubber, great job well done, Michael! =)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      teaches, thank you for a lovely comment. your thoughts on my poetry are always appreciated.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      I love the gentle whispers of this poem's thoughts on meeting someone who may add to a relationship. Sweet.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Blossom, for the commments. and the read.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Short, sweet and magical. Loved it.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago

      @Alur, thank you for reading my work and leaving a comment. it is appreciated.

      @jhamann, thank you for the visit .

      @ Ryem, thank you for your kind comments.

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      Ryem 5 years ago from Maryland

      This is a very sweet, peaceful poem. The images are beautiful. They fit the flow of your words very well.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 5 years ago from Reno NV

      What a great gift to such a great poet.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      And the title is genius!

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      ALUR 5 years ago from USA

      There is something that has changed in your writing to a more fluid state that I admire. Bravo!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Oh my gosh!! That was very beautiful! You really inspired me great Michael! I am so thrilled to read this awesome poem. It's a surprise and it's astounding.

      the photos were so nice it really fits the poem.

      thanks a lot Michael!!

      shared and voted all

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Jackie.

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      Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very nice, I love inspiration, it is like a free gift isn't it? All your poetry is equally as good though, however it came about. Up and across.