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The Temptress - Really Short Story

Updated on September 26, 2010
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Temptress Fantasy


She stood there with a pulchritudinous smile.

and Laughed as she took a breath.


The ability to stand there looking so breath taking,

Her intentions grasped at every opportunity,

To get what she really wanted.


She elapsed into time...

Time was not the best of her Management,

But she made effort.


She managed to look absolutely stunning,

With little or no effort at all.


The man she wanted never gave her the day or time,

He was involved with someone.


She desired him with red passion....

Gazing into the depths of what could be,

The side mind thinking... what should be,

Was absolutely overwhelming...

It should consume her every thought,

And dig deep into the depths of her mind,

But she somehow manages to toy with the idea and kept at it.


She was the "Temptress".... Of all of his

Imaginable means...


Her pulchritudinous smile... was so hypnotizing,

He wanted to dig his teeth in...

Puncture it so deep...

So that he would never forget the taste of her voluptuous lips.


Desiring the "Beauty" from afar was what he did... in the aisle of his fantasy.

Forsaking her, for, tempting him to want her...

He felt like a sinner,

For going against the woman he love,

And desiring the woman he didn't love.


She... who dares to steal another's love...

Is the Seductress of his imagination...

He wants to fulfill his fantasy and she becomes desired.


Taste my lips...

Touch my hips...

Rub my thighs...

Kiss me...

Bite me...

Beg me...

Lick me...

Pull me...

Scratch me...


Desire the Pulchritudinous one... the red hot lava of your fantasy.

Ignite your flow...

I am the best of your world...

You created this pulchritudinous girl...


Written by: J. Lono 2010


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      Dale Anderson 4 years ago from The High Seas

      You had me at the lips ;)

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      Cassandra Mantis 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Crazy how that word "pulchritudinous" keeps popping up all the time in this glorious sensualist poem! I agree with Cathy (Astra). The pen is mightier than any dildo! For the woman holding the pen, that is!

      Okay, that was a mild joke from me! Peace out! :)

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 7 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      @ jof155,

      Thank you! I'm pleased that you liked it.


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      jof155 7 years ago

      wow, good work!!

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 7 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      Thank you Astra Nomick!

      Ha Ha the steam is on... =-) I am pleased that you liked it.


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      Cathy Nerujen 7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      This is loaded with heavy longings and such energy. Whew, open the window and let the steam out. Ha. Fantastic - I really loved this. So passionate and involving.

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 7 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      Hello saleheen!

      Thank you for stopping by and reading my new hub. Yes the gift of "love" far more outweighs it's other temptations. Thank you!