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The Tortoise

Updated on April 23, 2017
The tortoise
The tortoise

Clumsy, ponderous,

sluggish pace,

drifting aims,

swift mind race,

steady balance in hectic slither.

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      DEBANGEE MANDAL 3 months ago from India

      Thanks Whonu, my friend.

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      DEBANGEE MANDAL 3 months ago from India

      Thank you so much Manatita for your kind words.

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      DEBANGEE MANDAL 3 months ago from India

      Thanks once again Chitrangada, it is always pleasing to have you here.

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      DEBANGEE MANDAL 3 months ago from India

      Yes , the tortoise always wins the race. Thanks Hari for coming across once again.

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      whonunuwho 3 months ago from United States

      Nicely written my friend. Many blessings. whonu

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      manatita44 3 months ago from london

      Goes to show. The Divine always compensates. Meaningful poetry.

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      Chitrangada Sharan 3 months ago from New Delhi, India

      Interesting and so meaningful poem! If we could aim and focus like tortoise , eventually we can win the race!

      Thanks for sharing!

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      Hari Prasad S 3 months ago from Bangalore

      Wow.

      That's how mind is.

      Mind it.

      It has to be ammended.

      Realize it.

      Tortoise always wins the race. Isn't it?

      - hari