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The Twinkle

Updated on April 20, 2012

Many try to express their Love for each other in their writing. The Lord gives us Mother Nature's beauty to show his love for us.



Who.. makes the bright stars

who.. makes the blue sky

What.. makes the Twinkles

that shine... in your eyes


Why does the Blue Ocean

try to hold us apart

the waves... they come and go

like the feelings... from our Heart


Mother Nature... she controls

all... of these wonderful things

but our Love... for each other

separation.... she can not bring


Like two stars in the sky... our love

shines.. for each other

stronger than any love...

that a child feels from it's Mother


Let me hold you close.... now

for soon.... we will part

just take my love.... with you

and keep it... deep in your heart


How.. can I show this

to my only true love

because... the Twinkle it comes

Only from the Lord up above










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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Beautifully poetic Michael..like two stars in the sky..love is a precious gift, it knows no barriers. Wonderfully written.

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      The sky holds beauty and mystery. I like the comparison you made here...with the love of two people. I sensed a spiritual weave.

      Thanks for sharing. Ann

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      Voronwe 5 years ago

      Another beautiful poem, Michael and with Nature. It's very pure. My favorite lines -

      "now for soon.... we will part

      just take my love.... with you

      and keep it... deep in your heart"

      Quite heartfelt words there. Thanks.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ann, thank you for your support and the kind comment.

      I had to write a poem as a break for my story was starting to get away from me . Thanks sweet.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      "Mother Nature... she controls

      all... of these wonderful things

      but our Love... for each other

      separation.... she can not bring"

      lovely lines.. mesmerizing poem...

      hat's off to the love :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Voronwe, my Lovely,

      So you found your favorite lines, I see

      For to my love, only can this poem be

      sent across the ocean...just for she

      to read when we are together

      just her and me.

      thanks for your kind comments

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Another beautiful poem on true love. I love the twinkle references it makes you think of dreams and magical happenings.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @Katrine, thanks for the visit and your logical comments.

      @ teaches, thank you for your comments. yes love is made of magical dreams that do come true.

      @rahul, thank you , you found magical lines too. Thanks for the comments.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Lovely poem Love the comparisons.

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      eheck 5 years ago from Des Moines, IA

      Nice poem and great symbolism

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ rosemay, thank you for the comments. love is symbolic in many ways.

      @ eheck, thank you for the visit, glad you liked the poem.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Michael, what truly struck me here is the way how you made the words shine! I feel like I'm basking in the light right now, it's truly amazing!

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      Annie Fenn 5 years ago from Australia

      You write so beautifully, Cleaner and I love this entwining of love and mother nature, captured in a 'twinkle'. Just beautiful, my votes and best wishes to you, and sharing!!!

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

      Like always,an exotic display of imagery in every verse. Nothing is grater than the majesty of God's love manifested

      through nature.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @max, thanks for the visit, glad you like my verse.

      the magic light of love is warm.

      @ Annie, my sweet,

      you have read and liked my little poem

      thanks for the kind comments, I also love the beautiful twinkle in your eyes.

      @anan, thank you for the comments, your poetry is is as good as mine also.

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      As always Michael, your poetry pulls on the heart strings with your romantic writing. I love how you use the beauty of nature to explain love. You are a true poet my friend.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Linda, thanks for reading my poetry, so I pulled on your heartstrings.? there is no better compliment than that.

      Love you always

      Michael

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      This is indeed a twinkle poem ! It gives twinkle to the eyes of the reader..well done poet.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      such a romantic feeling you evoke in me Michael...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ angel, thank you glad you liked the poem.

      @ raci, yes... raci, romance is good. thank you for your support

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      ziyena 5 years ago from Southern Colorado

      This poem is special ... it put a smile on my face. Wonderful Michael :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ziyena, thank you girl, glad you like the poem and your visit is special

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I love this beautifully written poetry on this special Earth day..Thank you..

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ruby, my lovely. thank you for your kind words . I want to thank you for your support. glad that you like my poem.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Beautiful words Michael! You are a true poet who captures all the senses in your words. :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline, thank you gorgeous. you look beautiful as always. glad you like the poem.

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      Tom Rubenoff 5 years ago from United States

      I like very much the combination of love and religion in this work, ending the poem with awe and gratitude. Nice.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Tom, thanks for reading my work. Your support is appreciated. glad you liked the poem

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      Daniel Austhof 5 years ago from West Michigan

      Nice poem my friend. I really like both the subject itself and the AWE which you speak of. And I see where I think you're taking us with this...God shows His love for us by the works of His hand, so we, like lovers, can show our love back to Him by... Thank You.

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      the Twinkle it comes, Only from the Lord up above and from the heart of Michael. This is an endearing poem filled with love and beautiful pictures as well. Voted up and awesome.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      aim4strz, thanks for the read. glad you like my poem.

      Mary, you did come.!!! Thanks Mary, for the comments, glad you like my write just like I like yours.

      Michael

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      SanneL 5 years ago from Sweden

      Twinkle twinkle little star

      what a wonderful poet you are. . .

      Michael, I love the beautiful rhythm and your capturing words you always use in your writing, so even in this poem. Just gorgeous!!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Sanne, thank you Sanne. I appreciate your continued support. Very glad to see you here. and to leave a comment for my work.

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