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The Wagon Train Diaries...4

Updated on June 23, 2014

The hanging


The Wagon Train Diaries...4

The Hanging

 

The rain that pelted the wagon trains for the past seven hours had finally stopped. The Wagon Master wanted to check the rain barrels so he could determine if he had enough water for washing and cooking. It was part of his duties.

Alastar Brown listened intently to the gentle breeze as the leaves crackled due to the raindrops. It was going to be a wonderful day. He crawled out of his wagon only to see something horrible. Something very disturbing. It was a hanging. Someone had hung Charlie Brooks from the biggest branch for everyone to see. He closed his eyes briefly as though he took a moment for prayer. A madman, his speculation was that the one who had hung Charlie was demented.

Then he heard a chorus of screams. The Wagon Master stood in front of his wagon with his hands clasped behind his back and surveyed the wagons. He looked at each wagon with the utmost scrutiny.

The screaming had stopped. He hadn’t heard another sound as the travelers gathered around the man hanging from a tree. In the empty silence that followed, the Wagon Master looked around at his fellow travelers. They seemed just as puzzled as he was.

"Justice, finally," said an older man. The bent, frail looking, white haired traveler who stood next to the Wagon Master shook his head. "In the times of a wild west, we finally tamed a mad man. He swings from that tree until God snatches his soul and throws him to hell."

"Yeah, but what happens to the soul of the man who hung him?" Alastar Brown replied with a rhetorical question. "This is murder."

"Murder?" another traveler shouted. "This is justice!"

The Wagon Master was about to acknowledge that comment but stopped when the voices of the travelers flooded the air.

"Settle down! I said settled down," he shouted. "This is murder, and I don’t care what anyone here says. Who ever did this will pay. This criminal act will not go unpunished!"

"He was my brother! Audrey Brooks shouted as she stood directly in front of the Wagon Master. "He butchered children!"

Alastar Brown bowed his head briefly and closed his eyes.

"He got what he deserved, and if you’re going to punish one then you’ll have to punish us all!"

"Audrey, I can’t allow this type of mad justice," said the Wagon Master. "It can’t be tolerated."

She turned and walked away slowly.

"Eric Skye, cut the man down and bury him next to his family," the Wagon Master ordered.

"No!" Shouted Audrey Brooks as she stopped dead in her tracks and turned around. " Bury that animal away from his family. His soul might butcher their souls!"

The Wagon master nodded his head in agreement.

"It’s done Alastar," said Eric Skye. "Lets just bury him and move on. Lets leave it at that."

The deed was done. The Wagon Master drew a deep breath and surveyed the wagons again. This place was the closet thing to home he would likely find here in the wild. And the travelers were like family. That notion should have comforted him, but it left him cold somehow.

 

Later that day White Deer came back from his scouting duties only to find out what someone had done to the prisoner. He sat down next to the Wagon Master, but did not offer any comforting words.

" How does the Dead Crow’s Valley look?" Alastar Brown asked.

"Like the end of the world," he replied.

"Any other way around it?"

"No."

The Wagon Master sighed.

"Feeling guilty?"

" A little."

" Do you think Eric Skye knew you were the voice in the shadows?"

"No."

"You did the right thing Alastar."

"Why don’t I feel right?"

"You had to do it that way."

The Wagon Master nodded somberly...


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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      You probably should look Triond up.. you get paid every month no matter how little or how much you earned..

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      Marlin 55 5 years ago from USA

      That's right, Frank, you never know. I'll have to check out triond.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Marlin thanks for checking this out yeah it didn't do well here on Hub pages.. but it did very well over at Triond..:) go figure LOL

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      Marlin 55 5 years ago from USA

      Frank, I'm glad you brought the Wagon Train Diaries back. They're very good and I love to read them.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Sue thanks for reading the train diaries :)

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      Sueswan 6 years ago

      Hi Frank,

      I wasn't expecting that Alastar was the voice in the shadows.

      Looking foward to the next chapter.

      Voted up and awesome.

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      American romance thanks for visiting the train.. and VG come on now..thanks LOL

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      Vinaya Ghimire 6 years ago from Nepal

      Frank, you are truly a master at writing dialogues. I can compare you with Hemingway.

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      American Romance 6 years ago from America

      Excellent writing, very interesting! voted up!

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      Thanks so much Audrey for following the wagon train diaries :)

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      Audrey Howitt 6 years ago from California

      I too didn't see the twist at the end until I got there---you are a wonderful storyteller!!

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      thanks so much H for reading the wagon :)

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      Brenda Barnes 6 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      Oh! That was not what I had in mind when I was deciding who-when-what and all that stuff. No wonder he is so concerned about the soul. His has huge blood stains on them. Great job Frank, just great writing.

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      thanks again Skye for reading the train.. Writer20 as always bless you :)

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      Joyce Haragsim 6 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Wow! this is such a great story. Like the above I'm waiting for more.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Yeah, but what happens to the soul of the man who hung him?" Alastar Brown replied with a rhetorical question. "This is murder."

      "Murder?" another traveler shouted. "This is justice!"

      My favorite part of this, series so far and I think there are many more to come and I am looking forward , because Dead Crow’s Valley , should also bring excitement.

      Great work brethren Eric Skye, ah ah mean brethren Frank. Great work.

      Bless.

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      Bless you Our Ms. Brooks :) Frank

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Frank you are the best story teller... I am always anxiously waiting to see what is going to happen next..

      Blessing to you

      I voted up of course...

      Debbie

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      Poetvix, you're too kind thankyou and Becky thanks again for riding this train :) Frank

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      Becky Katz 6 years ago from Hereford, AZ

      That is a surprise. I did not see that end coming.

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      poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      My mouth is hanging wide open, what a twist! I can't wait for the continuation.

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