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The Wedding Day

Updated on March 17, 2012
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.

Sweet caresses of you

On my skin

The pale white satin

Unfolds all around me

A little girl's fantasy

Coming to reality

The orchids and roses

A symbol of our love

This fairytale

Is my dream

Come true

As I walk down

I see

Your smiling face

I will always

Remember this moment

Of love and joy

In your eyes

As you slip the ring

Onto my finger

We connect


We dance to the night

You whisper to me

You my sweet

Will forever be with me

Till death do us part


For all eternity


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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Thank you for the positive feedback Chris. You inspire me to publish. :)

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      Chris Achilleos 5 years ago

      Once again a very beautiful poem :). If your thinking about publishing these poems, I will be buying your book for sure Caroline. Thanks for sharing!

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      Phoebe Pike 5 years ago

      You're welcome

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Thank you Phoebe!

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      Phoebe Pike 5 years ago

      It's a beautiful poem. You are an amazing poet!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Mckbirdbks if anyone knows about wedding days it would you be you! LOL. Love your story. Thanks for reading.

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      mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Voted up and beautiful. Ah, the wedding day.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      @ Gypsy thank you!

      @ Stesily no wedding date planned yet. I'll let you know when there is! LOL. I know when it finally comes it will be beautiful.

      @ Savanahl thank you! Yes it is in a lot of women's fantasies.

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      savanahl 5 years ago

      What a lovely poem. What girl wouldn't dream of such a fairytale wedding. Very nice.

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      stessily 5 years ago

      Caroline, Yes, I know that you will write something exquisitely, romantically, deeply unique for your wedding. Is your wedding day set?

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome! Lovely poem!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      @ Thank you Stessily! I plan on writing something similar on my wedding day. :)

      @ Hi Ruby I love weddings. I'm glad it brought back fond memories. :)

      @ Hi Jim it's great you're a perfectionist, so am I! LOL. What a great job you have! The cover looks gorgeous!!! I can't wait to get a signed copy. I am also going to buy some for some of my friends. :)

      @ Ana thank you for your kind words. I am glad it brought back good memories.

      @ Gina congrats to your daughter! Best wishes to her. I am glad you stopped by.

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      Gina Joy Bennett 5 years ago

      I really love this! My daughter is getting married in May & this really spoke to my heart.

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

      So cute, brought back memories of my own.

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      James W. Nelson 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Very beautiful, Caroline. I have been to a few weddings. As a florist I used to go regularly to decorate the church, pin the flowers, and direct the wedding. I didn't enjoy it because I wanted everything to be perfect, and most were, thank God. BTW, ordered first shipment of books with the new cover yesterday. It still is not showing up everywhere at Amazon.Here is the only place:

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Caroline, Beautiful indeed. Aha wedding bliss, i remember..Loved it...

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      stessily 5 years ago

      Caroline, such a lovely wedding poem which conjures up all the beautiful imagery of fairytale weddings, where forever begins with the never-ending circle of a ring.

      Your poem would make a beautiful wedding vow.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      @ Eiddwen thank you very much for stopping and reading. Enjoy your day as well. :)

      @ SimpleGifts thank you! I am happy you liked it. :)

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      SimpleGiftsofLove 5 years ago from Colorado

      Oh So Sweet! Nice photo too!

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Beautiful ;I loved it and thanks for sharing.

      Take care and enjoy your day.


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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Thank you Princess! Blessings to you too.

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      Princess Prisca 5 years ago from Heaven living on Earth


      Good Job! Love it!!!


      Ciao...Princess Prisca