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The Weight of Winter

Updated on November 26, 2011
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A Wintertime Haiku

Snow-covered pine trees

Hang heavy like broken hearts

Even branches break


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      amym1010 5 years ago

      Thank you. I love haikus!

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Very nice!

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      Brenda Barnes 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      This is lovely. The burden of cold, bitter snow is a great comparison to the broken heart which is always heavy. I like it very much.

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      amym1010 5 years ago

      Thank you both.

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      Senoritaa 5 years ago

      This has a sad tone to it, nevertheless its beautiful!

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      Catherine Tally 5 years ago from Los Angeles

      I love this one!