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The Wind Blue Cold

Updated on April 14, 2011

I sit and listen to your lonely howl

At times so angry you let out a growl

As you pass me by I can hear your faint whistle

As you blow along the garden thistle

The leaves swaying from side to side

As you pass me by swiftly with glide

You grace me with your presence so clear

No given formation in the skies atmosphere

You race against the birds’ way up high

Up, up it goes my kite in the sky

A shiver down my spine when you cross

A touch so cold you travel with frost

You bring in the rain clouds so grey

The branches and trees they swing and sway

Throughout the morning and all through the night

You blew out the flicker to my candle light

 

bellawritter23(copyright)2011

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      A beautiful homage to our dear friend Ms. Wind, like me, it both circles and twists to no end, yet my orbit, for sure, is for Bella, my friend...

      I particularly liked, "Throughout the morning and all through the night You blew out my [the] flicker to my candle light."

      Let's see if we can keep your flicker going, hmmmm... :)

      bb.

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      Johnny Love 6 years ago

      Bella, once again so amazing. The candle light of your heart truly shines. Up and awesome.

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      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      Brilliant bella,

      I love all your poems and this one is great. thank you for haring your talent here with us.

      Take care

      Eiddwen.

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      all the qualitys of the wind, invisible yet we see her all around. she can be peaceful or she can be a tempest. lovely poem.

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      Bumpsysmum 6 years ago from Cambridgeshire

      Lovely, I shivered as I read this, just imagining the chill wind blowing round me :-)

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      bb, thanks for the look out I fixed the problem lol. :)

      Johnny, Thank you I hope it does!!

      Eid, And I love your talent as well!!

      Nikki, Thanks sunshine cause you are like the sunrays beating down on earth.

      Bumpsys, I have been so cold lately :( so I wrote about the wind chill...

      smiles :)

      bella

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      bella, I do love the wind...I don't know why...I just do, and I love this descriptive piece!

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Thanks tnder! I appreciate the comment as always! Wind makes me cold and I do not like being cold.... he he

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Dr. Amilia 6 years ago

      You lady are a beautiful beautiful poet.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Thank you for the comment and feedback :)

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      ah is that why you are callin me sunshine now? thanx so much, and you are like the flowers that blossom, the spring and the summer of our seasons.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Lol Nikki! Yes ma'am!!

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      Wow!! All the sunshine and flowers and season stuff, and the fact that we finally have a warm day here, I do believe Spring has finally arrived, and selfishly it seems, it's all just for me... ;)

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      bb, you the best I cant say anything else you well rounded man!!

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      Radioguy 6 years ago from Maine

      This is very, very good! We are getting lots of wind this spring! It helps to dry things out...even the tears of Old Man Winter.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Radio, Thank you I know wind makes me cold and I shiver burrrrr!!! Thanks for reading!

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      Hey, I've lost eleven pounds with my new exercise routine - I'm not so round anymore. Working on an 7 pack, for sure.... ;)

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      Kathi 6 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

      Beautiful and charming in every way Bella!

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      X-Dplus-X 6 years ago from Poughkeepsie

      Nice one I felt drawn into the stanzas and felt longing at the end for the poem to go on. I like your style.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Great job bb! I am happy with you that you lost that darn old pound !!! My bf has a 12 pack lol jk hes got a really nice 6 pack in time bb I know you will get there me too tho I want a 6 pack :(

      Lady, thank you my dear friend for your comments as always !!!!

      X, Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to read it!!

      smiles all :)

      bella

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      saddlerider1 6 years ago

      I have blown in from the cold for a taste of this beautiful poem, you flavor it with special spices and the aroma is blown through my nostrils as the winds whirl about and mother nature plays havoc on our souls.

      I love the wind, it's sound, it's feel upon my face. Thank you for this summer breeze, so refreshing. Hugs

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Saddle, Thank you for stopping by your comments always so warm and touching :)

      smiles :)

      bella

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      ladyjojo 6 years ago

      Nice poem

      Quick short and powerful,lol

      Take care bella

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Thank you Jo. I appreciate your feedback very much I will be by very soon to read your newest art as well!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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